Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你没有直接回答问题，且问题重复显示理解有误。建议先用简短的主题句直接回答（Yes/No + 简要原因），然后补充一两句具体细节。注意句子简洁，最多5句，使用连接词如 “because” 或 “when” 来衔接。

예시: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because my parents often took me there on weekends. I enjoyed feeding ducks and playing on the swings, which made those days feel special.

제안: 回答不清晰且语法混乱。建议先用主题句明确是否喜欢（I still enjoy...），然后用一两句具体活动说明原因，使用连接词如 “so” 或 “because” 来组织句子，避免无关信息。

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I like outdoor activities. For example, I sometimes go climbing or play volleyball there with friends, which helps me relax and stay active.

제안: 回答较简单且有重复。建议先直接回答，然后给出具体理由和一个简单例子，用连接词如 “because” 或 “for example”。避免重复词汇，使用更合适的词汇来表达想法。

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve residents’ quality of life. For example, more green areas would provide spaces for exercise and family gatherings.

제안: 回答含糊且有语法错误。建议开头直接回应（Yes, I would like to visit...），然后具体说明想去的公园类型和原因，使用连接词如 “because” 并给出一两个具体活动例子，避免绝对化词汇（如 "everything"）。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit a climbing park and a volleyball park because I enjoy those sports. For instance, at a climbing park I could practice routes safely, and at a volleyball park I could join casual games with others.

× Now I because I want to have a restaurant in time in my home or going to climbing, play volleyball or else.

✓ Now I like going to parks because I can meet friends, play volleyball, go climbing, or relax at a café.

句子结构混乱，缺少主句动词，连接词使用不当且短语顺序错乱。应先给出主句（I like going to parks），然后用 because 引出原因，并将并列活动用动词不定式或并列动词短语正确列出。建议把意思分成主句+原因+并列活动，活动用并列结构（meet friends, play volleyball, go climbing, or relax）。

× Yes, I I like to see more parks in my in my city because that seems nice. They say that my city is a good city.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because that would be nice. People say that my city is a good city.

存在重复词（I I）和冗余短语（in my in my city）。此外，指代不清，that 用法不自然，改为 would be nice 更符合礼貌表达；They 在这里更自然用 People 表达“人们说”。建议删除重复，简化短语并用更自然的指代词。

× Yes, I want to, uh, climbing park and volleyball park because at there I can do ever, never everything I want to do.

✓ Yes, I want to go to a climbing park and a volleyball park because there I can do almost everything I want.

want 后面应接动词不定式 (want to go)，不能直接接现在分词 climbing；此外，短语“at there”不正确，应为 there；“ever, never everything”是错误搭配，改为 almost everything 表达“几乎所有”。建议记住 want + to do 结构，避免不正确的副词组合，使用 there 替代 at there。

× Did you go to the park as a child?

✓ Yes. I often went to the park as a child.

考官问过去习惯，学生原句为反问不符合上下文，应直接回答并用过去时描述习惯（often went）。建议使用过去时表述过去经常发生的动作，如 used to 或 often + past tense。

× Do you still like going to parks now?

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now.

原对话中学生未直接回答问题。回答应使用现在时（still like）表示现在的喜好一致性。建议用简单现在时直接回答考官关于现在习惯的问题。