Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 短く直接的に答える点は良いですが、文法（時制・動詞の形）と具体性が不足しています。より自然な英語では、過去の習慣を表すために過去形を使い、1文目で明確に答えた後に1〜2文で具体例や理由を付け加えると良いです。例えば、遊んでいた活動（例：滑り台、サッカー）や一緒にいた相手（友達や家族）を入れると内容が豊かになります。

예시: Yes, I did. I loved playing outside when I was a child. For example, I often played football with my friends in the local park on weekends.

제안: 肯定で始めているのは良いですが、文法の混乱（時制の一致、不完全な文章）と内容の曖昧さが目立ちます。現在の好みを述べるときは現在形を使い、理由を明確に述べてください。接続詞（because, since, so）を使って理由をつなげ、具体的な活動や頻度を示すと説得力が増します。

예시: Yes, I do. I still enjoy going to parks because I like being outdoors and exercising. For example, I usually go for a walk or jog there twice a week.

제안: 回答が質問に直接答えておらず、意味が不明確な部分（意味の通らない句や語の誤用）が多くあります。まずは質問に対して直接“Yes”か“No”で答え、その後に理由を1〜2文で説明してください。語彙の選択を簡潔にし、文全体の論理的つながり（例：because, so, therefore）を保つことが大切です。テニスコートの利点や公共施設としての利便性を具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

예시: Yes, I would. More parks with sports facilities like tennis courts would be great because they make it easier for people to exercise and meet others. For example, if there were more courts, I could practice tennis more often with friends.

제안: 公園の名前と行きたい意図を伝えられている点は良いですが、文法（省略や時制）、語順、語彙の誤用が多いです。1文目で明確にしたあと、なぜ行きたいか（有名な理由）を具体的に述べ、最後に訪問時にしたい活動を2つまで挙げてください。接続詞で文を滑らかにつなぐとより自然に聞こえます。

예시: I'd like to visit Yoyogi Park in Tokyo. It's a very popular park known for weekend events and open spaces. I would love to have a picnic there and maybe watch a live performance on the weekend.

× Yes, I like play outside.

✓ Yes, I liked playing outside.

The student used 'like' plus base verb 'play' which is incorrect for past habit. The question asked about childhood, so past tense is required. Use 'liked' (past) and correct verb form 'playing' (gerund) after 'like'. Suggestion: say 'I liked playing outside.'

× Yes I do. I still like playing outside because I liked but I outside.

✓ Yes, I do. I still like playing outside because I liked it when I was outside.

The original has incomplete and mixed tenses. For a current preference use 'I still like playing outside.' The reason should use past tense 'liked it' or present 'I enjoy being outside.' Also include object 'it' and a clause 'when I was outside' to clarify. Suggestion: 'I still like playing outside because I liked it when I was outside.' or 'I still like playing outside because I enjoy being outdoors.'

× I like people talk back because the park has a tennis court and I enjoy playing tennis.

✓ I like to go there because the park has a tennis court and I enjoy playing tennis.

The phrase 'I like people talk back' is ungrammatical and uses incorrect pronouns. Likely intended meaning is personal preference to go to the park. Use 'I like to go there' or 'I like going there.' Also keep consistent subject 'I' and correct verb forms. Suggestion: 'I like going there because the park has a tennis court and I enjoy playing tennis.'

× It convenient to practice their Galaxy and having good factories in the naked.

✓ It is convenient to practice there, and it has good facilities nearby.

The sentence contains many incorrect words and word forms: missing verb 'is' before 'convenient', wrong noun 'Galaxy' and 'factories' and 'in the naked' are incorrect. Likely intended 'there' and 'facilities' or 'facilities nearby'. Use 'It is convenient to practice there, and it has good facilities nearby.' Suggestion: replace unclear words with 'there' and 'facilities'.

× I'd like I'd like to go to Yoyogi Park. It a very popular park in Tokyo famous for it is open special and weekend event.

✓ I'd like to go to Yoyogi Park. It's a very popular park in Tokyo, famous for its special events on weekends.

Missing contraction 'it's' (it is) and incorrect structure 'famous for it is open special and weekend event'. Use possessive 'its' and 'special events on weekends'. Also remove duplicate 'I'd like'. Suggestion: 'I'd like to go to Yoyogi Park. It's a very popular park in Tokyo, famous for its special events on weekends.'

× So I'd love to visit and enjoy a picnic or watch St. performance.

✓ So I'd love to visit and enjoy a picnic or watch a street performance.

'St. performance' is unclear and likely intended 'street performance'. Also include article 'a' before 'picnic' or 'street performance'. Suggestion: 'enjoy a picnic or watch a street performance.'