Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical and vocabulary errors. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two brief supporting details. Use the correct word 'parks' (not 'bags'), correct tense for childhood (past), and avoid self-contradictory statements. For example, say whether you liked parks as a child, give a reason or memory, and keep it within 1–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child because there was a playground where I could climb and play with friends. I also remember picnics with my family, which made visits feel special.

제안: The reply is short and grammatically incorrect. Begin with a clear direct answer (Yes/No), then briefly explain why with a reason or current habit. Use present simple (I don't go to parks) or present continuous correctly and add one supporting detail using a linking word such as 'because' or 'because of'.

예시: Not really — I don't go to parks much these days because I am usually too busy with work, and there aren't many green spaces near my home.

제안: You meant 'parks' but said 'bags', which confuses the response. Give a direct answer, then give a clear reason and a specific benefit of more parks (e.g. exercise, children, environment). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas and keep it concise.

예시: Yes, I would — I think more parks would be great because they provide places for exercise and family gatherings, and they would improve air quality in crowded areas.

제안: This answer is brief and vague. Provide a direct answer and, if negative, explain why and possibly mention a type of park you might visit in the future. If positive, name a park or type and give a short reason. Use future phrasing like 'I might' or 'I would like to'.

예시: I don't have a specific park in mind, but I might visit a botanical garden in the future because I enjoy seeing different plants and taking photos.

× No, I don't like 2 bags 'cause I don't I I'm not child.

✓ No, I didn't like going to parks because I wasn't a child.

The student used incorrect pronouns and words that do not match the question. The sentence also mixes present tense with past meaning. The response should refer to childhood (past), use 'didn't like' for past negative and 'wasn't a child' or better 'I was a child' corrected to 'I wasn't a child' is odd meaning; intended meaning likely 'I was not a child anymore' but context asks 'as a child?' so correct is 'No, I didn't like going to parks when I was a child.' Suggested clear correction: 'No, I didn't like going to parks when I was a child.' Use correct pronouns and past tense.

× No, I'm not going to park.

✓ No, I don't go to the park.

The student used present continuous 'I'm not going' which implies a temporary planned action; the question asks about current general preference or habit, so simple present 'I don't go to the park' or 'I don't like going to the park' is appropriate. Also include the article 'the' before 'park' for a specific location.

× Of course, I'd like to see more bags in my city.

✓ Of course, I'd like to see more parks in my city.

The learner used 'bags' instead of 'parks' (word choice error) and 'I'd like to see more parks' correctly expresses desire. This is a vocabulary/word choice mistake rather than grammar, but it affects pronoun/reference clarity. Replace with the correct noun 'parks'.

× No, I don't like to go.

✓ No, I don't want to go.

The reply 'I don't like to go' is grammatical but sounds unnatural for future intention in response to 'Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?' Better is 'I don't want to go' to express lack of desire for future visits. Use simple present 'don't want' to state preference about future plans.