Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct verb forms and articles ('a park', 'have fun').

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I used to go with my parents every weekend, and I often played on the swings and slides. Also, I liked meeting my friends there because we would play tag and ride bikes together.

제안: Improve grammar (correct verb forms and articles), use linking words for coherence, and be specific about routines. Limit to 2–4 sentences and avoid repeated words.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to the park, especially in the morning. I usually go there with my family to do yoga and light exercise, and sometimes I meet friends in the afternoon to play football.

제안: Use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer sentence structure. Give a brief reason and a specific example using linking words ('for example', 'because'). Mention why more parks would be beneficial.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space and places to relax. For example, Mehdot Park is popular for its historic site and small museum, which makes it an interesting place to visit.

제안: Be concise and organize ideas: start with a clear statement of desire, then give specific details. Correct grammar (articles, prepositions, word order) and avoid unnecessary filler words. If mentioning foreign parks, give one clear reason why you want to visit.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit a park in Canada in the future because I heard it has beautiful ponds with many fish. I am especially interested in seeing the wildlife and peaceful scenery there.

× Yes, I enjoyed going to park as a child.

✓ Yes, I enjoyed going to the park as a child.

The noun 'park' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to parks in general experience context or a specific place the speaker used to visit; 'going to park' is incorrect in English. (grammar_problem_type_id:22)

× I used to go with my parents for playing in the park.

✓ I used to go with my parents to play in the park.

Use the infinitive 'to play' after 'go' to indicate purpose and use preposition 'to' with the verb 'go'. 'For playing' is unnatural here; 'to play' is the correct form to express intended activity. (grammar_problem_type_id:11)

× I I would like to fun with my friends in the park.

✓ I would like to have fun with my friends in the park.

The verb phrase needs 'have fun' to express enjoying an activity; 'fun' alone is a noun and cannot follow 'would like to' without a verb. Also remove the duplicated 'I'. (grammar_problem_type_id:8)

× I still enjoy go to the park with my family.

✓ I still enjoy going to the park with my family.

After the verb 'enjoy', use the -ing form of the verb: 'enjoy going'. 'Enjoy go' is ungrammatical. (grammar_problem_type_id:10)

× I I only prefer go to park in the morning with my family to do yoga, some light exercises and oftenly I also go with my friends for playing.

✓ I only prefer going to the park in the morning with my family to do yoga and some light exercises, and I also often go with my friends to play.

Several issues: after 'prefer' use the -ing form ('prefer going'); insert the definite article 'the' before 'park'; 'oftenly' is not a word — use 'often' and place it before the verb; use 'to play' instead of 'for playing'. Remove duplicate 'I'. (grammar_problem_type_id:10)

× Some parks is very interesting and they are in my city.

✓ Some parks are very interesting and they are in my city.

Plural subject 'parks' requires plural verb 'are', not 'is'. (grammar_problem_type_id:27)

× There is a Mehdot park which is famous for the historic site and there are museum also in this.

✓ There is a Mehdot Park which is famous for its historic site, and there is a museum there as well.

Use capitalized proper name 'Mehdot Park' and the possessive 'its' to link 'historic site' to the park. 'There are museum' is incorrect: 'museum' singular requires 'is'. Use 'there' instead of 'in this' to refer back to the park. Also use 'as well' or 'also' in proper position. (grammar_problem_type_id:22)

× Yes, Sam, I want to go in the future some parts which is located in the Canada, I heard about that park, they have a a small ponds with fishes.

✓ Yes, Sam, in the future I want to visit some parts of Canada; I heard about a park there that has small ponds with fish.

Reorder for clarity: place time expression 'in the future' before the main verb. Use 'visit' for going to places, 'parts of Canada' without 'the' unless specifying, plural subject 'parts' needs 'are located' or better rephrase. 'A a' duplicate removed. 'Ponds' plural with 'small ponds' is fine; 'fish' as plural is uncountable/plural without 'fishes' in this context. Replace comma splice with proper punctuation. (grammar_problem_type_id:26)

× I like to see some fish live swimming and some park has a dolphin also, so.

✓ I would like to see live fish swimming, and some parks also have dolphins.

Use 'would like' or 'like to' consistently; 'see live fish swimming' is smoother than 'see some fish live swimming'. Use plural 'parks' and plural 'dolphins' or 'a dolphin' with singular park. Place 'also' before the verb or after subject for natural word order. Remove trailing 'so.' (grammar_problem_type_id:6)