Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 在回答中注意时态一致、语法和词汇准确性，并保持简明自然。避免冗长和模糊表达；使用一到两句支持细节并用连接词使语句连贯。可以把“let me fresh”改为更自然的表达如“help me relax”。此外注意冠词（a park / the park）和单复数（too much fun → not many entertainment options）。

예시: Yes, I loved going to the park when I was a child. I grew up in a small city with limited entertainment, so my grandparents often took me to the park to relax and play, which made my childhood very happy.

제안: 回答要更自然并注意句子流畅与词汇选择。避免犹豫语（uh）和语法错误（Park → the park / parks）。用连接词（so / therefore）清晰说明原因，并用具体活动支持观点（e.g., read, exercise）。

예시: Absolutely. As a student I have a lot of stressful work every day, so parks are a great place to relax and recharge. I often go there to read, jog or just enjoy the fresh air.

제안: 回答含混且有错误（表达与逻辑不清，'skyscrapers get to girls GDP' 无意义）。应直接回应问题并给出理由，使用清晰的连接词（because / however）。避免俚语与错误搭配，提供具体比较或建议（e.g., prefer mixed-use spaces or more green areas）。

예시: I don't think we need many more parks because the current number is sufficient. However, I would support improving existing parks with more facilities like playgrounds and seating rather than building new ones.

제안: 回答总体明确但注意语法和表达简洁。改进点：用连贯句子说明愿望并给出具体原因或期待的活动；修正冠词和签证相关表达（get a visa / be invited as a visitor）。避免口语填充词并保持不超过5句。

예시: I'd love to visit New York City's Central Park because it's famous for its gardens, lakes and cultural attractions. I hope I can go there someday if I can obtain a tourist visa and explore the park on foot and by bicycle.

× I did like going to park when I was a little child.

✓ I did like going to the park when I was a little child.

句子中缺少定冠词“the”，英語中表示特指或習慣性去某類場所（如 park）時通常要用“the”。建議記住常見地點（the park, the cinema, the hospital 等）在表示特定或習慣性時多使用定冠詞。

× so the city was not so convenient and also have too much fun, so my grandpa and grandma always took me there and let me fresh.

✓ so the city was not very developed and there were not many fun activities, so my grandpa and grandma always took me there to refresh.

原句中多處語法和詞彙使用不當：1) “not so convenient” 意圖表達城市不發達或不方便，應改為“not very developed”或“not very convenient”；2) “have too much fun” 用法錯誤，意思不清，應改為“there were not many fun activities”；3) “let me fresh” 不正確，應用不定式或短語如“to refresh”或“to feel refreshed”。整句需要重組以保持意思清晰。建議練習連詞與短語的搭配，並注意動詞不定式和固定表達。

× Yes I do. I did like going to park when I was a little child.

✓ Yes, I did. I liked going to the park when I was a little child.

在回答過去的習慣時應使用過去時態“liked”，而不是現在時“do/did like”混用。此外，回答簡短時常用“Yes, I did.” 更自然。建議區分簡單過去和現在時的用法，過去習慣用過去式。

× I mean, Park is a really good place to let me recharge and make me alive.

✓ I mean, the park is a really good place to let me recharge and make me feel alive.

1) 地點名稱前需要定冠詞“the park”。2) “make me alive” 不自然，應使用固定搭配“make me feel alive”。建議熟悉常見形容詞或動詞片語的搭配，特別是“feel alive”。

× I still have a lot of tough stuff to do every single day.

✓ I still have a lot of tough stuff to do every single day.

此句語法上沒有名詞單複數錯誤，但“stuff”是不可數名詞，用法正確。此處列出以確認無需改動。

× I mean, Park is a really good place to let me recharge and make me alive.

✓ I mean, parks are really good places to let me recharge and make me feel alive.

若說一般情況而非特指單一公園，應使用複數“parks are...places”。保持主謂一致和名詞數一致。建議根據語境決定使用單數（the park）或複數（parks）。

× Not really 'cause I think the amount of parks are pretty good actually.

✓ Not really, because I think the number of parks is pretty good actually.

“amount” 用於不可數名詞，應用“number” 表示可數名詞（parks）的數量；主語“the number” 為單數，因此謂語應使用“is”而非“are”。建議區分 amount（不可數）與 number（可數）並注意主語謂語一致。

× And uh, if we have some large space I reckon not to build parks but skyscrapers get to girls GDP.

✓ And uh, if we have some large spaces, I reckon we should not build parks but skyscrapers to increase GDP.

原句結構混亂：1) “some large space” 應為複數或加冠詞；2) “I reckon not to build parks” 不自然，應改為“I reckon we should not build parks”；3) “skyscrapers get to girls GDP” 完全不通，推測意圖為“增加 GDP”，應改為“skyscrapers to increase GDP”。建議重構句子，使用完整的從句和正確的動詞短語。

× Where I want to go to, you know, probably one of the biggest park in the world, which is New York City's Central Park.

✓ Where I want to go to is probably one of the biggest parks in the world, which is New York City's Central Park.

1) “one of the biggest park” 應為“one of the biggest parks”（複數形式）。2) 整句需有謂語“is”。建議注意“one of the + 複數” 結構並保證從句完整。

× I always wanted to be there, but I don't have a visa and I'm not sure whether I can get a one or I will be invited visitor.

✓ I have always wanted to be there, but I don't have a visa and I'm not sure whether I can get one or whether I will be invited as a visitor.

1) 時態改為現在完成“have always wanted” 更自然表達持續的願望；2) “get a one” 錯誤，正確說法為“get one”（不加冠詞）；3) “be invited visitor” 應為“be invited as a visitor”。建議注意固定搭配和情態/被動結構的使用。