Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer grammatically correct, more natural and slightly more specific. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and articles.

예시: Yes, I really enjoyed going to the park with my friends and parents when I was a child. We often played games and had picnics under big trees, which I remember fondly.

제안: Correct minor article and plural errors, and tighten phrasing. Use linking words to connect reasons and include a brief specific example of an activity you do there.

예시: Yes, I enjoy going to parks every weekend because they are a great place to relax; for example, I usually sit by the pond to read or chat with neighbors and sometimes join a community jogging group.

제안: Fix grammar and redundancy, combine ideas into a coherent sentence using linking words, and provide one specific reason or example. Avoid sentence fragments and repetition.

예시: Yes, I think parks are essential in any city because they provide fresh air and green spaces, and they also create harmonious environments where people and wildlife can coexist, such as ponds that attract birds and butterflies.

제안: Capitalize names correctly and use natural adjectives. Add a brief reason why those features appeal to you to enrich the answer.

예시: I would like to visit Beehive Park in Beijing because it has a large open area, a clear lake and boats to ride, which sounds perfect for relaxing and taking photos.

× Yes, I really enjoy go to the parks with my friends and parents.

✓ Yes, I really enjoyed going to the parks with my friends and parents.

Original uses incorrect verb form after 'enjoy' and tense mismatch. 'Enjoy' should be followed by the -ing form ('enjoy going'). The context asks about the past (as a child), so use past tense 'enjoyed going'. Suggestion: use 'enjoyed going' for past habitual actions. Grammar problem type ID: 8 and 5

× Yes, I enjoy going to park every weekend because it's a good place to relax and I can meet many new friends there.

✓ Yes, I enjoy going to the park every weekend because it's a good place to relax and I can meet many new friends there.

The countable noun 'park' in this context needs a definite article 'the' when referring to a habitual specific place. Use 'the park' not 'park'. The rest of the sentence is grammatically correct and matches present habitual tense. Grammar problem type ID: 17 and 1

× Yes, I think park is an essential part of our city because not only because it can provide fresh air, but can also provide. Harmonious environments between people and animals.

✓ Yes, I think parks are an essential part of our city because they not only provide fresh air but also create harmonious environments for people and animals.

Multiple issues: 'park' should be plural 'parks' to match general statement (singular/plural). Subject-verb agreement requires 'parks are'. The phrase 'not only because' is redundant; correct structure is 'not only ... but also ...'. 'Provide' should directly follow and 'create' is a better verb for 'harmonious environments'. 'Between' is less appropriate than 'for' when describing environments that benefit groups. Also remove stray period. Suggestions: use plural 'parks', correct conjunction structure, and use 'for' to show benefit. Grammar problem type ID: 1, 16, 11 and 26

× I want to go to the Beehive Park in Beijing because it has an open area, a Clear Lake and some boats on it.

✓ I want to go to Beehive Park in Beijing because it has an open area, a clear lake and some boats.

Do not capitalize common nouns like 'clear lake'; use lowercase 'clear lake'. 'The' before park name is not necessary if the official name is 'Beehive Park'—omit 'the' unless it is part of the name. 'On it' is redundant after 'boats'; simply 'boats' is sufficient. The sentence otherwise correctly expresses future intention with 'want to go'. Grammar problem type ID: 22 and 13