Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a clear direct answer (topic sentence) and one or two brief supporting details. Keep it natural and concise, avoid turning the question back. Use linking words if adding details (for example, 'because' or 'and').

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they had playgrounds and open space to run around. For example, I often played hide-and-seek with friends and rode a small bike on the paths.

제안: Your reply is unclear and again repeats or transforms the question instead of answering. Provide a direct yes/no or brief statement, then add a specific reason or activity. Use simple linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I like jogging and relaxing in nature. For instance, I usually go twice a week to exercise and read on a bench.

제안: You repeated the examiner's question rather than answering. Give a clear opinion and justify it with one or two concrete reasons or consequences. Avoid asking questions back. Use linking words such as 'so' or 'therefore' to make your point coherent.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in the city because they improve air quality and provide safe places for children to play. Therefore, new parks would make neighborhoods healthier and more pleasant.

제안: Again you repeated the question instead of answering. State a specific park or type of park you want to visit and explain why, with a brief supporting detail. Keep the answer direct and use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

예시: Yes, I want to visit the new waterfront park next year because it has cycling paths and a botanical garden. For example, I plan to go there for a weekend ride and to see the plant collections.

× Do you like going to parks as a child?

✓ Did you like going to parks as a child?

The examiner asked about past habit (as a child), so the student's reply should use past tense. Using present tense 'Do you like' conflicts with 'as a child' time marker. Change to 'Did you like' to match past time. Suggestion: match the verb tense to the time expression (past marker -> past tense).

× How do you still like going to parks now?

✓ Do you still like going to parks now?

The student used 'How do you still like...', which is ungrammatical for a yes/no question about the present. The examiner asked 'Do you still like...?' so the correct form is 'Do you still like...?' Use auxiliary 'do' + subject + base verb for present simple yes/no questions; do not add 'How'.

× Would you like to see more parks in the city?

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?

The examiner asked about parks 'in your city'. The student's reply changed to 'in the city', which is less specific and may change meaning. This is an article/context issue and clarity error. Use 'your city' to match the question's reference to the student's city. Suggestion: keep demonstrative/possessive references consistent with the question's context.