Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct basic grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I did), then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct noun forms and avoid filler sounds (uh, umm).

예시: Yes, I did. As a child I often went to the neighborhood park to play on the swings and join informal football games with friends. Because the park was peaceful and full of trees, it felt like a refreshing escape on weekends.

제안: Answer directly and correct pronunciation and word choice (park, not pork). Use a linking phrase to contrast past and present and give one clear example of current use.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy parks, but I use them differently now. For example, I often meet friends there for a walk or sometimes I go alone to read and relax in a quiet spot.

제안: Be careful with article and count noun usage (a lot of parks / green spaces) and avoid overly formal words that sound unnatural (omnipresent). Provide a brief reason and one specific benefit.

예시: Yes. Although our city already has several parks, I would like more green spaces because they improve air quality and give residents convenient places to exercise and relax.

제안: Clarify park names and facts (Central Park in New York) and avoid vague phrasing. State a clear example of a park you want to visit and say why, using one or two specific details.

예시: Yes, I'd love to visit Central Park in New York because of its large lakes, historic bridges, and cultural events. I also want to explore famous urban parks around the world to see how different cities design green spaces.

× I think I would say yes, uh, I really used to like to go to park and I right now also like to go to park this like a green space, very comfortable, umm, a fresh uh weekend.

✓ I think I would say yes. I really used to like going to the park, and right now I also like going to the park. It is a green space, very comfortable, with fresh air on weekends.

The definite article 'the' is required before a specific place noun like 'park' when referring to parks in general habitually. Also corrected verb forms: 'used to like to go' -> 'used to like going' and 'like to go' -> 'like going' for natural English. Added missing articles and clarified 'fresh air on weekends'. Suggestion: use 'the park' for habitual visits and prefer gerund after 'like'. Grammar problem type ID: 17

× When I was a child, I used to play in the kids sports uh, in this.

✓ When I was a child, I used to play in the children's sports area.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Kids sports' should be the possessive form 'children's sports' and 'in this' is vague; 'area' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: use 'children's' for activities for kids and a noun like 'area' or 'program' to complete the phrase. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Yes, right now I go to pork also, but in a different way I would say, because now I go to park like with my friend for example, or just to be with myself, you know?

✓ Yes, right now I go to the park too, but in a different way, I would say, because now I go to the park with my friends, for example, or just to be by myself.

Multiple issues: 'pork' is a typo for 'park'. Use 'the park' and 'too' instead of 'also' for natural placement. Use plural 'friends' if speaking generally and 'by myself' rather than 'with myself'. Suggestion: correct typos, use 'the' for the park, and natural phrasing 'by myself'. Grammar problem type ID: 17

× Yes. I mean there are already a lots of parks or green space, but I think it's important to have green space everywhere.

✓ Yes. I mean there are already a lot of parks and green spaces, but I think it's important to have green space everywhere.

'a lots of' is incorrect; use 'a lot of' or 'many'. 'Green space' should be plural 'green spaces' when referring to multiple areas. Also 'and' is better than 'or' here. Suggestion: use 'a lot of' or 'many' and match singular/plural nouns. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× Nature has to be omnipresent in our today cities.

✓ Nature has to be omnipresent in our cities today.

Word order is incorrect: 'today' should follow 'cities' or be placed at end. 'Our today cities' is ungrammatical; correct phrase is 'our cities today'. Suggestion: place time expressions after the noun or at the end of the sentence. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× Of course, when I think about Sparks, I dream to go.

✓ Of course, when I think about Sparc, I dream of going.

Assuming intended place is 'Center Parcs' or 'Sparks' unclear; 'dream to go' is incorrect verb pattern; use 'dream of going'. Also proper noun capitalization and name should be verified. Suggestion: use 'dream of doing' construction for desires about activities. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× It's like Center Parks in New York.

✓ It's like Central Park in New York.

The correct famous park name is 'Central Park'. 'Center Parks' is incorrect. Use proper noun accurately. Also no article change if using the fixed name. Suggestion: learn and use correct place names; 'Central Park' is a singular proper noun. Grammar problem type ID: 17

× It's one of the most known and famous in the world.

✓ It's one of the most well-known and famous parks in the world.

'Most known' is non-native; use 'well-known'. Also include the noun 'parks' after adjectives. Suggestion: use 'well-known' and place the noun after adjectives when needed. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× So yeah, to discover new green space around the world, I think it's very interesting.

✓ So yeah, to discover new green spaces around the world is very interesting to me.

Use plural 'green spaces' when referring generally to multiple areas. The original sentence had awkward infinitive structure; rephrase to make it a clear statement. Suggestion: use plural nouns for countable things and prefer clearer sentence structures.