Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较直接，但存在语法和表达不自然的问题。建议：1) 开头用一句主题句直接回答并给出原因；2) 修正语法（如“I very like”应为“I really like”）；3) 避免无关的信息或重复，控制在3-4句内；4) 使用连接词让句子更流畅，例如“because”或“so”。具体练习：把思路整理为“喜欢—原因—举例/结果”。

예시: Yes, I did. I enjoyed going to parks because there were many children and fun activities, so it was easy to make friends. For example, I often joined group games and met new people.

제안: 回答较好，内容具体且有细节，但有小的语言和连贯性问题。建议：1) 将句子更自然地连接，例如用“which”或“and”来合并描述；2) 调整词序和用词（“lake lying in the center”改为“a lake in the centre”）；3) 控制句子数量并用连接词说明目的或频率。

예시: Yes, I do. There is a Forest Park near my home which has plenty of roses and a lake in the centre, and I often go there to enjoy the scenery and exercise, such as jogging or stretching.

제안: 回答有逻辑，但表达略显书面和重复。建议：1) 用更自然的表达连接观点，如“because”引出理由；2) 用更具体的例子替换泛泛的描述；3) 修正单复数和代词一致问题（“Parks contain… It can”应统一为“They can”）。

예시: Yes, I would, because more parks would improve air quality and provide space for leisure. For example, families could have picnics, people could exercise or simply take a relaxing walk.

제안: 答题偏离“公园”类别并有多处语言错误。建议：1) 明确目标地与“公园”概念的关系（Disneyland是主题公园，可说明为主题公园）；2) 修正文法和不自然短语（如“must try activity”、“try something right”）；3) 简洁表达愿望并给出具体原因或活动。

예시: Yes, I'd like to visit Hong Kong Disneyland, which is a famous theme park. I want to see the nightly fireworks and try popular rides that I often see on social media.

× I'm always a people person.

✓ I'm always a people person. (no change)

原句語法上沒錯，但語義上較不自然。people person 是名詞短語，前面用 always 修飾可接受。若要更地道可說 “I'm a people person” 或 “I've always been a people person”。建議：視語境改為 “I've always been a people person” 以強調自童年起的特質。

× I very like to make new friends.

✓ I really like to make new friends.

中文解釋：英文中不能用副詞 very 直接修飾動詞 like。'very' 通常修飾形容詞或其他副詞；修飾動詞時應用 'really' 或 'very much'。建議用法：'I really like to make new friends.' 或 'I like to make new friends very much.'。

× There is a Forest Park where I live that has plenty of flowers like roses and lake lying in the center.

✓ There is a Forest Park where I live that has plenty of flowers like roses and a lake lying in the center.

中文解釋：名詞單複數須正確；'lake' 在此應為可數名詞，需加不定冠詞 'a'。此外句子結構可保留現在時。建議在可數名詞前使用適當冠詞：'a lake'。

× I often go there to appreciate the natural scenery and do some exercise such as jogging or stretching.

✓ I often go there to appreciate the natural scenery and do some exercises such as jogging or stretching.

中文解釋：exercise 在表示可數的活動時常用複數 'exercises' 或使用不可數時不接例如 'such as' 列舉具體活動。因為後面列舉了多種活動，改為複數 'exercises' 更自然。

× Parks have lots of other children and more entertainment facilities.

✓ Parks have lots of children and more entertainment facilities.

中文解釋：短語 'lots of other children' 意味著相對於某些孩子之外的其他人，語境不需要 'other'。刪去 'other' 更自然。若想表達“很多其他的孩子”需有參照對象。此處改為 'lots of children'。

× Parks contain many plants. It can help clean up the air and provide more green space for people to relax and exercise.

✓ Parks contain many plants. They can help clean the air and provide more green space for people to relax and exercise.

中文解釋：代詞指代錯誤，'It' 指單數，但前句主語 'Parks' 為複數，應改用 'They'。同時 'clean up the air' 可簡化為 'clean the air'。建議：主謂一致，複數主語用複數代詞。

× For example, people can have picnics or go for a walk or wander around there.

✓ For example, people can have picnics, go for a walk, or wander around there.

中文解釋：列舉動作時應使用平行結構，連接詞前的標點與動詞形式需一致。原句雖可理解，但用逗號分隔和保持平行（go for a walk）更自然流暢。建議使用逗號分隔項目，保持動詞形式一致。

× I've always wanted to visit Hong Kong Disneyland because I often see people talking about it on social media regarding it as a must try activity.

✓ I've always wanted to visit Hong Kong Disneyland because I often see people talking about it on social media, regarding it as a must-try activity.

中文解釋：需加連字符 'must-try' 作為複合形容詞修飾 'activity'。另外在分句之間加逗號讓句子更清晰。動詞時態保持現在完成與現在時描述習慣都合適。

× I'm especially keen on watching the nightly fireworks and try something right, so I hope to.

✓ I'm especially keen on watching the nightly fireworks and trying other attractions, so I hope to.

中文解釋：'keen on' 後面應接動名詞 (verb+ -ing)，因此 'watching' 正確，但 'try' 應改為 'trying'。此外 'try something right' 不自然，改成 'trying other attractions' 更符合語境。最後 'so I hope to' 可接受，但可完整寫 'so I hope to go.' 建議：'keen on' 後統一使用動名詞形式，並用自然的名詞短語代替不明確的 'something right'。