Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更自然、時態一致並提供具體細節。避免重複單字（like）並把句子化為主句加支持句。可以說明喜歡哪些活動、頻率或感受。注意時態（過去式）和語法（動詞形式）。

예시: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks when I was a child. I often played games like hide-and-seek and climbed trees with my friends, which made those afternoons really fun and memorable.

제안: 句子結構和語法需要改正，使用正確的動詞形式與連接詞，並給出具體原因或例子。避免直譯中文語序，說明你如何在公園放鬆（例如散步、跑步或看書）。

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because walking there helps me relax. For example, I often take a 30-minute walk after work to clear my mind and enjoy the fresh air.

제안: 回答需更清晰且語法正確。先給出直接回答，再用一到兩句具體理由支持，避免語法錯誤和不通順表達。可以說明更多公園帶來的具體好處（健康、社交、減壓）。

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they give people easy access to nature. More parks would encourage outdoor exercise, improve mental health, and provide safe places for families to meet.

제안: 回答要更具體說明為何想去（景觀、活動或體驗），並修正語法和形容詞用法（e.g. "very special" 可改為更具體描述）。保持句子不超過五句。

예시: Yes, I would love to visit the Daisy Mountains in the future because the scenery is said to be stunning. I want to hike the trails and see the wildflowers, and I also hope to take photos of the panoramic views.

× Yes, I'd like to because when I was a child I like to go to the park to play with my friends.

✓ Yes, I did, because when I was a child I liked to go to the park to play with my friends.

原句时态混用：开头回答“Yes, I'd like to”不符合过去常态的提问语境；后半句“when I was a child I like to go”中“when I was a child”表明是过去习惯，动词应使用一般过去时（liked）。建议：在谈过去的习惯或经历时，用一般过去时（如liked）。

× Of course, because I think go to the parks has a walk can make me comfortable.

✓ Of course, because I think going to parks for a walk can make me feel comfortable.

原句存在动词形式和句子结构错误。‘think go to the parks has a walk’不合语法，应把‘go to parks’改为动名词短语‘going to parks’，并用‘for a walk’表示散步。同时要加上使役结构‘make me feel comfortable’或‘make me comfortable’更自然。建议：使用动名词作主语或宾语（going），并注意固定搭配（go for a walk, make someone feel comfortable）。

× Of course, because I think the people need to call into the nature can make them hard, comfortable.

✓ Of course, because I think people need to get close to nature; that can help them relax and feel comfortable.

原句中多个词组使用错误：‘call into the nature’不是正确表达，应该说‘get close to nature’或‘be close to nature’；‘can make them hard, comfortable’语序和词汇不当，‘hard’用法不明。改为‘help them relax and feel comfortable’更符合意思。建议：使用常见搭配如‘get close to nature’和‘help someone relax’来表达接近自然能够让人放松。

× Of course I want to go to the Daisy Mountains because I think there is very special.

✓ Of course I want to go to the Daisy Mountains because I think it is very special.

原句中‘there is very special’结构错误。描述某地“很特别”应使用形式主语或直接用‘it is’或用具体主语‘the Daisy Mountains are very special’（如果把主体视为复数山脉）。此处作为单一景点可用‘it is very special’。建议：注意使用正确的主语和系动词结构（it is / they are），并与主语数一致。