Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer grammatically consistent (use past tense for childhood), be concise, and add one specific detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting details linked with a simple connector.

예시: Yes — I loved going to parks as a child. After school I often played on the swings and had picnics with my family, which was a nice way to relax and make friends.

제안: Answer directly and use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement and tense). Give a brief reason and one specific example to support your statement, using a linking word such as 'because' or 'although'.

예시: Not really. Although I pass by parks occasionally, I rarely visit them now because I have little free time after work and prefer exercising at the gym.

제안: Be clear and specific about why more parks are needed. Avoid hesitation sounds and incomplete sentences. Use a linking word to add a reason and give one concrete benefit of adding parks.

예시: Yes, I would like more parks in the city because we currently have very few green spaces. More parks would give children safe places to play and help improve air quality and community health.

제안: Produce a clear, concise answer with correct tense and a specific example of a park or country you'd like to visit. Use a linking phrase to explain your reason.

예시: Yes — I would like to visit Central Park in New York in the future because I want to experience its famous paths and seasonal events while travelling abroad.

× Yes, I do like going to parks as a child because uh, these are the things I do usually when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child because these were things I usually did then.

Tense inconsistency: the sentence mixes present simple (do like, do usually) with past time reference (as a child, when I was a child). Use past tense throughout when talking about past habits. Also reposition adverb 'usually' to before the main verb for natural word order (usually did). Suggestion: Keep past tense for past habits (liked, did) and place adverbs in typical positions (usually before the verb).

× Going to park after school, spending the time where I can enjoy my free time from school and sometimes.

✓ I used to go to the park after school to enjoy my free time.

Fragment: this phrase lacks a clear subject and finite verb and contains redundancy ('spending the time where I can enjoy my free time from school and sometimes'). Simplify to a complete sentence with subject and past tense verb for past habit. Suggestion: Turn fragments into full sentences: include the subject and verb and remove redundant phrases.

× Since I am already a working person, going to parks are just a normal thing to do as an adult and.

✓ Since I am now a working person, going to parks is just a normal thing to do as an adult.

Subject-verb agreement and tense/context: 'going to parks' is a singular gerund phrase requiring singular verb 'is', not 'are'. 'Already' sounds odd; 'now' fits context better. Remove trailing conjunction. Suggestion: Use 'is' with gerund subjects and choose adverbs that match context ('now' for current state).

× I can see that I'm not really into visiting parks.

✓ I am not really into visiting parks.

Minor style: 'I can see that' is unnecessary and adds present-tense reporting; simpler present statement is clearer and matches the question about current preference. Suggestion: For clarity, state direct preference in present simple.

× I think I would like to see more parks in our city because, uh, right now there are no more parks built in the city and.

✓ I would like to see more parks in our city because right now there are no new parks being built.

Awkward 'no more parks built' and tense: use 'no new parks being built' to indicate current lack of construction. Remove trailing conjunction. Suggestion: Use 'new' with 'parks' to convey additional parks and use continuous passive 'being built' for ongoing construction situation.

× Rarely I can see umm. Children to play in the park because most of them.

✓ I can rarely see children playing in the park because most of them don't go there.

Adverb placement: 'rarely' should generally come after subject or before main verb ('I can rarely see'). Sentence fragment 'because most of them.' is incomplete; complete reason needed. Change 'children to play' to 'children playing' for correct participle form. Suggestion: Place adverbs correctly and complete the clause explaining why, using negative present simple for habitual actions ('don't go').

× If I were to ask if I'm going to any parks where I never in this world, I would like to say yes because I wanted to see.

✓ If I were asked whether there are any parks in the world I haven't been to, I would say yes because I want to see them.

Multiple errors: incorrect conditional phrasing and tense mismatch. 'If I were to ask if I'm going to any parks where I never in this world' is ungrammatical. Use passive/indirect question 'if I were asked whether there are any parks... I haven't been to' and keep conditional/modal 'I would say'. Use present 'want' to express current desire rather than past 'wanted'. Suggestion: Use proper conditional structure and correct relative clause for 'haven't been to' and keep verbs consistent in tense and modality.

× I would like to say yes because I wanted to see. Different environment and to travel the world.

✓ I would like to say yes because I want to see different environments and travel the world.

Preposition and sentence fragmentation: 'see. Different environment' is fragmented and 'environment' should be plural if general. 'Wanted' (past) should be 'want' (present) to match the conditional 'I would like'. Also remove unnecessary 'to' before 'travel' when paired with 'see' in a parallel structure. Suggestion: Combine fragments into one sentence, use plural for general nouns, and maintain parallel verb forms in lists.