Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Reduce hesitations and correct verb tense consistency.

예시: Yes. I loved going to parks as a child because I played many different games there with my friends. For example, we often raced, played hide-and-seek, and had picnics in the evenings, which made those visits very enjoyable.

제안: Use correct tense and reduce filler words. Give a direct topic sentence, then briefly explain reasons and add a specific example connected with a linking word (e.g., 'but' or 'however').

예시: I don't go to parks very often now because I am busy with work and studies. However, when I have free time, I visit a park with my family in the evenings to walk and play games together.

제안: Answer directly and avoid unclear phrasing. Use linking words to connect childhood memory to present preference, and give a specific reason why more parks would be useful (e.g., health, community).

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because parks encourage outdoor activity and community events. For example, more green spaces would give families places to exercise, relax, and socialise on weekends.

제안: Be fluent and avoid negation confusion. Give a clear short answer then expand with a realistic scenario using linking words (e.g., 'but' or 'if').

예시: No, there isn't a specific park I plan to visit, but if I have the chance to travel, I would definitely explore new parks to see different landscapes and recreational facilities.

× When I was a child, I loved to go to parks for playing different type of games and on the daily basis I go to uh, I was going to park, uh, park for doing, doing activities with my friends in the evening time and we enjoyed too much.

✓ When I was a child, I loved going to parks to play different types of games, and on a daily basis I used to go to the park to do activities with my friends in the evening, and we enjoyed it a lot.

Use of verb + -ing (gerund) is correct after 'loved' (loved going) and 'to' plus base verb for purpose should be 'to play' or use gerund 'to do activities' should be 'to do activities' but avoid 'for doing'. Also correct awkward repetitions and phrasing: 'on a daily basis' instead of 'on the daily basis', 'used to go' for habitual past, and 'enjoyed it a lot' for natural expression. Suggestion: use 'loved going', 'to play', and 'used to go' for habitual past actions.

× Nowadays I'm not going to park too much because I don't have the time for spending, spending my free time in at parks, uh, like uh, but whenever I have a time, I went to park with my friends and family members for playing and doing activities in the evening time.

✓ Nowadays I don't go to the park much because I don't have time to spend my free time in parks, but whenever I have time, I go to the park with my friends and family to play and do activities in the evening.

Tense consistency: use present simple for current habits ('I don't go', 'I don't have'), and 'go' for habitual actions rather than past 'went'. Remove redundant words and use 'time to spend' instead of 'time for spending'. Use 'the park' or 'parks' consistently and 'to play and do activities' for purpose. Suggestion: keep present simple for routines and avoid repetition.

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in my life because I remember when I was a child, I I'm spending my lot of time in parks with my friends and family and whenever I have I have time today, then definitely I enjoy enjoyed that moment and find the new parts.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because I remember that when I was a child I spent a lot of time in parks with my friends and family, and whenever I have time today I definitely enjoy those moments and find new places.

Incorrect past tense forms and mixed tenses: use simple past 'I spent' for past actions. Remove repeated auxiliaries and correct 'enjoy enjoyed' to present simple 'enjoy' for current habitual enjoyment. 'Find the new parts' is unclear; use 'find new places'. Suggestion: use past tense for memories and present tense for current habits, and avoid repeated words.

× So there's no any parks which I think like I want to visit in the future. But if I have a chance to explore new parks, then definitely I go to, I go and explore it.

✓ There aren't any specific parks that I want to visit in the future, but if I have the chance to explore new parks, I will definitely go and explore them.

'No any' is incorrect; use 'there aren't any' or 'no' + plural. Also correct number agreement ('parks' with 'them') and future intention: use 'I will definitely go' for future action. Avoid filler repetition. Suggestion: use 'aren't any', 'the chance', and 'will' for future intentions and match plural pronouns.