Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and include a clear topic sentence plus one specific detail. Use past tense consistently and avoid repetition. For example, say when you went, who you went with, and one activity you did there.

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I went every weekend with my family and sometimes with my friends, and we often played football or had picnics on the grass.

제안: Provide a direct response, then add a specific current habit or plan with a linking word (e.g., because, so, and). Use present simple for current preferences and present continuous or future for definite plans. Give a reason to make it more informative.

예시: Yes, I do still enjoy parks. In fact, I plan to visit the famous Central Park next weekend because I enjoy walking there to relax and take photos.

제안: Answer directly and clearly, avoid repetition, and explain with one concise reason or condition. Use linking words (however, currently, but) and avoid using culturally specific fillers like 'Inshallah' unless explaining meaning. Keep tense consistent.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for exercise and relaxation; however, I am currently busy with work, so I cannot visit often at the moment.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence naming the park, then add one specific reason why you want to visit and when you might go. Avoid repetition and keep it to one or two supporting sentences with linking words like because or so.

예시: Yes, I want to visit Parakeet Park in the future because I have heard it has beautiful gardens and a large lake; I hope to go there next spring when the weather is nicer.

× Yes, I like, I like park when I was child and I went to the park every weekend with my family and with and my friends.

✓ Yes, I liked going to the park when I was a child, and I went to the park every weekend with my family and my friends.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I like' with past time reference 'when I was child'. Use past tense 'liked' to match the time frame. Also include the article 'a' before 'child' and remove the extra 'and'. Use 'going to the park' for natural expression.

× Yes I do and next weekend I will go to the famous park.

✓ Yes, I do, and next weekend I will go to the famous park.

The original is mostly correct but needs a comma for clarity. 'Will go' correctly expresses a future plan. No tense change required; punctuation improves readability.

× Yes, yes I do. But now I am busy. That's why now, that's why I am not going currently. Inshallah in future I will go.

✓ Yes, I do. But I am busy now, so I am not going currently. Inshallah, I will go in the future.

Use consistent word order 'I am busy now' and combine clauses with 'so' for cause and effect. 'Not going currently' is acceptable, but placing 'currently' after the verb sounds more natural. 'In the future' is the idiomatic phrase for future time; add commas for clarity.

× Yes, I will go. Yes, I will go. Yes, I will go Parakeet in my future to visit it.

✓ Yes, I will go. I will visit Parakeet in the future.

Redundant repetition removed. Use 'I will visit Parakeet' for correct verb-object order and 'in the future' for natural expression. Avoid ending with 'to visit it' which is repetitive.