Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不是回答考官的问题，而是重复了问题本身。请直接回答问题，使用主题句并补充一两句具体细节，如你去公园做什么、与谁一起、频率或感受。注意句子不要太长，最多五句并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my parents and younger sister to play on the swings and have picnics. The fresh air and open space made me feel free, and we usually went there every weekend during the summer.

제안: 你的回答仍然是重复问题，而且语法有误。请直接给出明确的观点（是或否），并用一到两句具体原因或例子支持，例如运动、放松或社交的用途。使用连接词（because, so, although）保持逻辑流畅。

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are a great place to exercise and relax. For example, I usually jog there twice a week and sometimes meet friends for a coffee on the benches.

제안: 你重复了考官的问题而没有回答。请给出直接回答并解释原因，提供具体细节如城市拥挤程度、空气质量或娱乐需求。可以提出比较或建议，句子总数控制在五句以内并使用连接词（such as, because, therefore）。

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because many neighborhoods lack green space. More parks would improve air quality and provide safe places for children to play and for residents to relax.

제안: 你的回答又是重复问题，未提供个人信息或计划。请直接回答（比如提到具体公园或类型的公园），并说明原因或计划时间，提供一到两句细节。用连接词（for example, because, so）使回答连贯。

예시: Yes, I want to visit the large botanical garden near the river next month because I have heard it has beautiful seasonal flowers. I plan to go there with my camera and take photos of the rare plants.

× Do you think like going to parks now?

✓ I still like going to parks now.

原句“Do you think like going to parks now?” 在语法和用法上不正确。考官的问题是现在时的疑问句“Do you still like going to parks now?” 学生的回答应为肯定句，使用现在时表达现在的喜好。错误类型归为“现在时问题（Present tense issue）”。建议用简单现在时陈述自己的现状，例如“I still like going to parks now.” 如果想省略“now”也可说“I still like going to parks.” 这样更自然。