Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Did you like going to parks as a child?
수험생
Good job! You answered the question and made your meaning understandable: you liked going to parks as a child and you tried to explain why. To make your answer stronger for IELTS, you should focus on clearer sentence structure, correct verb forms, smoother linking words, and add one specific example or detail. Improvement suggestions: - Fluency & Coherence: Avoid excessive hesitations and fillers (um, uh). Pause briefly to plan then speak more smoothly. Use a clear sequence: statement + reason + short example. - Grammar: Use past tense consistently for childhood: “I liked” / “I found” / “I met.” Correct subject-verb and tense forms: e.g., “I used to find friends there” (not “I have found at a friend”). - Vocabulary & Range: Replace vague phrases like “out of friends” with precise phrases like “new friends” or “playmates.” Use linking words: “because,” “so,” “for example.” - Pronunciation (if implied): Reduce fillers that disrupt clarity; pronounce key words (friends/park/play) clearly. - Content & Length: Give one or two short reasons and a brief example. Two sentences are enough but make them complete and informative. Improved example: When I was a child, I really liked going to parks because I could meet new friends and play games outdoors.
시험관
Do you still like going to parks now?
수험생
Yeah, right now I'm 22, but I still like going to parks. It doesn't matter if I'm saying it doesn't matter. Sometimes I go single, I go with my friends, or sometimes I go with my family to have one there to talk with each other. And I really like it because it's really.
시험관
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
수험생
Yeah, yeah, I really would like to see more parks in my city because, uh, when I go there, I don't feel relaxed and peaceful, uh, for my brain or for my body and that's why I wanna see out of parks here. Also, I also see out of parks in Baku. Uh, it's enough for me because I can go there.
시험관
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
수험생
Good job! - You answered the question directly and gave a specific example (gantry parks), which is good for clarity and relevance. - Your meaning is generally clear: you want to visit more parks in the future because they are interesting and good for relaxation. Improvement suggestions: - Coherence & fluency: Reduce hesitations (uh) and make sentences smoother. Try linking ideas: state the reason, then give an example and say what you want to do there. - Grammar: Correct verb forms and articles. For example, say "there are lots of parks nearby" (not "parking backward"), and "I haven't been there" (not "I never go there"). - Vocabulary: Replace vague words like "interesting for me" with stronger phrases: "appeal to me," "sound appealing," or "are very attractive." Use a variety of verbs: "visit," "explore," "relax," "have fun." - Length / detail: Expand to two or three sentences. Give a short reason and one detail about what you would do there (e.g., have a picnic, walk trails). - Pronunciation (implied): Reduce filler words so speech sounds more confident. Improved example: Yes. There are lots of parks near my home that I haven't had time to visit yet. For example, I want to visit the gantry parks because they sound really appealing — I would like to relax there and walk along the trails or have a picnic with friends. Azerbaijani suggestion for grammar and structure: - Qısa cümlələr qurun və əvvəlcə əsas fikri deyin, sonra səbəb və nümunə verin. - Məsələn: "Bəli.
평가
총점
Part 1
Did you like going to parks as a child?
점수: 72.0제안: - Daha qısa və düzgün cümlələr qurun: əvvəlcə əsas fikri deyin, sonra səbəb verin və nəhayət qısa bir nümunə əlavə edin. - Keçmiş zamanlardan ardıcıl istifadə edin (məsələn, "I liked", "I used to play"). - Lazımsız "um/uh" kimi fasilələrdən çəkinin; fikri planlayıb daha axıcı danışın. - Məhz ifadələrdən istifadə edin: "new friends", "playmates", "outdoor games" kimi sözlər daha dəqiqdir. - Cümlə uzunluğunu 2-3 cümlə ilə məhdudlaşdırın və hər cümləni məna baxımından tam edin.
예시: When I was a child, I liked going to parks because I could meet new friends and play different games. For example, I often played hide-and-seek with neighbourhood children near the big oak tree.
Do you still like going to parks now?
점수: 58.0제안: - Cümlələri daha aydın və qısa edin; əsas fikri bir cümlə ilə verin, sonra səbəb və bir nümunə əlavə edin. - Qrammatikanı düzəldin: "I sometimes go alone", "I go with my friends" və ya "I go with my family to relax and talk" kimi. - Faydasız təkrarlardan və qeyri-müəyyən ifadələrdən ("It doesn't matter if I'm saying it doesn't matter", "because it's really") çəkinin. - Axıcılığı yaxşılaşdırmaq üçün keçid sözlərindən istifadə edin: "often", "sometimes", "because". - Maksimum 3 cümlə saxlayın və hər cümlədə konkret məlumat verin.
예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. Sometimes I go alone to read and relax, but often I visit with friends or family so we can talk and have a picnic.
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
점수: 50.0제안: - Fikrinizin məntiqini aydınlaşdırın: parkların artmasını istədiyinizi və nə üçün istədiyinizi konkret şəkildə izah edin. - Səhv ifadələri düzəldin: "I feel relaxed and peaceful" (mənfi yox, müsbət); "I want to see more parks here"; "There are already some parks in Baku, but I would like more." - Filler sözlərini (uh, um) mümkün qədər çıxarın və ifadələri qısa saxlayın. - Konkret səbəblər və mümkün nəticələr verin (məsələn, "more places to exercise", "better environment for families").
예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they help me relax and stay active. For example, more parks would give people more places to exercise, walk their dogs, and meet friends outdoors.
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
점수: 70.0제안: - Cavabınızı daha strukturlaşdırılmış edin: əvvəlcə qısa cavab verin, sonra niyə istədiyinizi deyin və nə edəcəyinizi bir nümunə ilə göstərin. - Keçid sözlərindən istifadə edin və qrammatikanı yoxlayın (məsələn, "I want to visit the gantry parks because they sound appealing"). - 2-3 cümlə ilə məhdudlaşın və konkret fəaliyyətləri göstərin (piknik, gəzişmək, şəkil çəkmək).
예시: Yes, there are a few parks I want to visit, especially the gantry parks. I would like to go there to relax, walk along the trails, and maybe have a picnic with friends.
문법
× You answered the question and made your meaning understandable: you liked going to parks as a child and you tried to explain why.
✓ You answered the question and made your meaning understandable: you liked going to go to parks as a child and you tried to explain why.
The original sentence is mostly understandable but has a minor verb phrase choice issue: 'liked going to parks' is acceptable, but keeping parallel structure with 'to go' after 'liked' makes the sequence clearer when followed by 'as a child'. Suggestion: maintain consistent infinitive or gerund structures and keep sentences concise.
× Right now I'm 22, but I still like going to parks.
✓ Right now I am 22, and I still like going to parks.
Use consistent linking and conjunctions; 'but' suggests contrast that is not needed here. This is a stylistic correction to make the sentence flow; ensure present simple for habitual likes.
× It doesn't matter if I'm saying it doesn't matter.
✓ It does not matter how I say it.
The original is repetitive and unclear. Replace the unclear reflexive phrasing with a clearer pronoun structure. Use 'how' to indicate manner rather than repeating 'it doesn't matter'.
× Sometimes I go single, I go with my friends, or sometimes I go with my family to have one there to talk with each other.
✓ Sometimes I go alone, sometimes I go with my friends, and sometimes I go with my family to talk with each other.
Use 'alone' instead of 'single'. Separate ideas with proper conjunctions or sentence breaks. 'To have one there' is unclear and unnecessary; simplify to the purpose 'to talk with each other'.
× And I really like it because it's really.
✓ I really like it because it is relaxing and peaceful.
The original sentence is incomplete ('because it's really' lacks an adjective). Provide a complete adjective phrase showing the reason. Use clear descriptive words to finish the clause.
× I really would like to see more parks in my city because, uh, when I go there, I don't feel relaxed and peaceful, uh, for my brain or for my body and that's why I wanna see out of parks here.
✓ I would really like to see more parks in my city because when I go to parks I feel relaxed and peaceful for both my mind and body, and that's why I want to see more parks here.
Tense and polarity were confused: saying 'I don't feel relaxed' contradicts desire to have parks. Use present simple for habitual feelings: 'I feel relaxed'. Replace informal 'wanna' with 'want to' and unclear 'see out of parks' with 'see more parks'. Use 'mind' instead of 'brain' for natural English collocation.
× Also, I also see out of parks in Baku.
✓ Also, I have visited parks in Baku.
'See out of parks' is ungrammatical. Use verb 'visit' with object 'parks' and present perfect 'have visited' if referring to experience. Avoid duplicate 'also'.
× Uh, it's enough for me because I can go there.
✓ There are enough parks for me there because I can go to them easily.
Clarify the subject: 'it' is vague. Use plural 'parks' and 'go to them'. Make purpose and ability clear with 'because I can go to them easily'.
× You answered the question directly and gave a specific example (gantry parks), which is good for clarity and relevance.
✓ You answered the question directly and gave a specific example (gantry parks), which is good for clarity and relevance.
This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. Keep praise sentences concise and accurate.
× For example, I want to visit the gantry parks because they sound really appealing — I would like to relax there and walk along the trails or have a picnic with friends.
✓ For example, I want to visit the gantry parks because they sound really appealing; I would like to relax there, walk along the trails, or have a picnic with friends.
Minor punctuation and parallelism improvements: separate clauses clearly and keep verbs parallel ('relax', 'walk', 'have'). Use semicolon or period to separate the reason from the activities.
× There are lots of parks near my home that I haven't had time to visit yet.
✓ There are a lot of parks near my home that I haven't had time to visit yet.
'Lots of' is informal but acceptable; 'a lot of' is slightly more neutral. Both are grammatical; change is stylistic. Ensure present perfect 'haven't had time' is used for experience up to now.
'/%3e%3c/svg%3e)