Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a clear topic sentence in past tense, correct grammar, avoid repetition, and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "When I was younger," "because"). Keep within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. When I was younger we had a small park near our apartment, and I often played on the swings and the slides. I especially remember climbing to the top of the jungle gym because it felt exciting and gave me a great view of the whole park.

제안: Answer directly in present tense, use complete sentences, and use linking words (e.g., "and", "also", "because"). Be specific about activities and reasons to make the answer more natural and informative.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I often go for walks and sometimes meet friends or family there, and I particularly like seeing the flowers and trees because they make the park peaceful and relaxing.

제안: Avoid unnecessary words like "Please." Give a direct opinion and add one reason or example using linking words (e.g., "because", "so that"). Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for exercise and relaxation. For example, more parks would make it easier for families to spend time outdoors without traveling far.

제안: Provide a complete sentence with a topic statement and a brief supporting detail about why you want to visit that park. Use linking words like "because" or "as" to explain your reason.

예시: Yes, I want to visit the new park in our city because I have heard it has a large lake and modern play areas. I plan to go there with my family to try the walking trails and enjoy the scenery.

× Yes, I like going to parks.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks.

The question 'Did you like going to parks as a child?' is in the past tense; the student's response should use past tense to match. Use 'liked' to indicate a past habit or preference. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs when referring to past experiences (e.g., 'I liked playing outside').

× When I was a child in the city we have a small park.

✓ When I was a child in the city we had a small park.

The sentence refers to a past time ('When I was a child'), so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Have' is present; change to 'had'. This is a past tense issue (ID 5) and subject-verb agreement in tense. Suggestion: Keep verbs consistent with the time reference (use past tense after time markers like 'when I was a child').

× I like playing the swings, slides and climb the climb at the top of.

✓ I liked playing on the swings and slides and climbing to the top of the climbing frame.

Multiple issues: tense should be past ('liked') to match 'When I was a child' (past tense issue). 'Playing the swings' needs preposition 'on' (preposition issue ID 11). 'Climb the climb at the top of' is ungrammatical; use the gerund 'climbing' for parallel structure with 'playing' and a clear object 'the climbing frame' or 'the hill'. Suggestion: Use parallel gerund forms for lists of activities and correct prepositions (e.g., 'playing on the swings', 'climbing to the top').

× Yes, until now I like going to the park, go for a walk or.

✓ Yes, even now I like going to the park to go for a walk.

The phrase 'until now' is awkward here; 'even now' is more natural. Also the sentence mixes verb forms: 'I like going' then 'go for a walk' should be expressed as purpose or parallel form. Use 'to go for a walk' or 'and go for a walk'. Suggestion: Keep verbs parallel and use appropriate connectors: 'I like going to the park to go for a walk' or 'I like going to the park and going for a walk'.

× Chat with some friends or family outdoor and I like seeing the flowers and trees especially.

✓ I chat with friends or family outdoors, and I especially like seeing the flowers and trees.

Several issues: sentence should be complete and in present tense when answering current habits (present tense issue). 'Chat' needs subject 'I chat' or use gerund 'to chat' depending on structure. 'Outdoor' should be the adverb 'outdoors' (preposition/adverb issue ID 11/13). Word order 'especially' is better before the phrase it modifies: 'especially like'. Suggestion: Use correct adverb form 'outdoors', include the subject, and place adverbs close to the words they modify. Note: If the speaker intends to describe current habits, use present simple: 'I chat... and I especially like...'.

× Please I would like to see more parks in my city.

✓ I would like to see more parks in my city.

The word 'Please' at the start is unnecessary in this answer to a question about preference; it does not create a grammar error but affects naturalness (sentence structure issue ID 26). The rest is grammatically correct. Suggestion: Omit 'Please' unless making a request. Keep the sentence concise for a preference statement.

× Yes, the new park in our city.

✓ Yes, the new park in our city.

The student's answer to 'Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?' is a fragment lacking a verb or full clause. To be grammatically complete and explicit, say 'Yes, I want to go to the new park in our city.' This is a sentence without a verb (ID 23). Suggestion: Provide a full clause with subject and verb when answering questions ('Yes, I want to visit the new park in our city').