Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì và cấu trúc câu), trật tự từ và rõ ràng trong ý. Tránh lặp từ và hoàn thành câu thay vì để dang dở. Cụ thể: dùng thì quá khứ đơn cho hành động lặp trong quá khứ (I usually went → I usually went/ I used to go), dùng động từ đúng dạng (I liked to play / I played football and basketball), thêm mệnh đề kết thúc rõ ràng. Giữ câu không quá dài (tối đa 3-4 câu) và dùng từ nối thích hợp nếu cần.

예시: Yes. I used to go to the park a lot when I was a child. I often played football and basketball there with my parents and my brother. Those visits were very enjoyable because we spent time exercising and chatting together.

제안: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (countable/uncountable: much/many, have time), trật tự từ và lặp từ. Nên diễn đạt ý chính rõ ràng: vẫn thích nhưng bận rộn. Dùng liên từ hợp lý để kết nối ý (however, because). Tránh lặp từ và hoàn thiện câu thay vì dừng lặp.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, but I don't have much free time at the moment. However, I try to visit a park occasionally because I like fresh, unpolluted air and a peaceful environment.

제안: Cần sử dụng từ vựng chính xác (parks, playground), sửa cấu trúc câu và làm rõ ý: bạn có muốn thêm công viên không và vì sao. Dùng cụm từ so sánh/miêu tả rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (subject-verb agreement). Nên đưa lý do cụ thể (giải trí, không khí sạch, không gian cho trẻ em).

예시: Yes, I would. Although our city already has several parks, more green spaces would be welcome. Parks provide a clean environment and safe playgrounds where children can play and families can relax.

제안: Cần diễn đạt ý định tương lai bằng thì tương lai (will/would/hope to), sửa từ vựng và cấu trúc (go to the park, I don't have a car), làm rõ thời gian và hoàn thành ý. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và nhiều từ sai chính tả. Nên nói cụ thể muốn đến công viên nào hoặc vì sao.

예시: Yes. In the future I hope to visit several parks that I haven't reached yet. I don't own a car now, so travel is difficult, but I hope I will have the chance to go to the parks I like when I have more time or a car.

× When I was a child, I'm usually went to the park because I like play football, basketball on every sport in the park with my parents and my brother, but at the.

✓ When I was a child, I usually went to the park because I liked to play football and basketball with my parents and my brother.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly ('I'm usually went' and 'I like play'). Use past simple for habitual actions in the past: 'I usually went' and 'I liked to play'. Also correct verb forms: 'liked to play' and link the sports with 'and'. Remove the trailing fragment 'but at the.' Suggestions: keep tense consistent (past) and use correct infinitive or gerund: 'liked to play'.

× Yeah, I like to go into the park now, but I don't have many free time to go to it. But I like going to the not polluted environment, but I'm not have any any time to to.

✓ Yes, I like to go to the park now, but I don't have much free time to go. I like being in a clean, unpolluted environment, but I don't have any time to do that.

Errors include wrong preposition 'into' (use 'to the park'), quantifier 'many free time' should be 'much free time', repetition and wrong verb form 'I'm not have' should be 'I don't have', and awkward phrase 'not polluted environment' better as 'clean, unpolluted environment'. Also remove duplicate words and incomplete 'to to'. Suggestions: use correct quantifiers with uncountable nouns, correct auxiliary verbs for negation, and natural collocations like 'go to the park' and 'have time to do something'.

× Yeah, in my city we have many, many parts because my city is a modern city. But they very like the parts, like the clean environment or a place to placeboard with the the children.

✓ Yes, in my city we have many parks because my city is modern. People really like the parks, such as their clean environment and places where children can play.

'parts' should be 'parks' (wrong word), repetition 'many, many' is acceptable but redundant. 'They very like the parts' is incorrect structure; use 'People really like the parks'. 'place to placeboard' is unclear; use 'places where children can play'. Also remove duplicate 'the the'. Suggestions: use correct vocabulary ('park' not 'part'), ensure subject matches verb and choose natural expressions like 'people really like' and 'places where children can play'.

× Yes, I like gold into the park, but I'm not have three times and I don't have a car to move to the every the parts all my life. But I want one time on the future I can go to the part I want.

✓ Yes, I like going to the park, but I don't have enough free time and I don't have a car to visit the parks. However, I hope that in the future I can go to the park I want.

Many tense and form errors: 'gold into' should be 'going to' (gerund), 'I'm not have three times' is incorrect—likely meant 'I don't have enough time', and 'move to the every the parts' should be 'visit the parks'. 'One time on the future' should be 'in the future'. Suggestions: use gerund after 'like' ('like going'), use correct negation 'I don't have', use quantifier 'enough free time', and use 'in the future' for future reference. Keep verbs and expressions natural and consistent.