Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap kısa ve dilbilgisi hatalı. Daha doğal ve tam bir cümle kurmalısınız; neden sevdiğinizi veya hangi aktiviteleri yaptığıınızı belirterek iki veya üç destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (because, and, so) kullanarak cümleleri bağlayın.

예시: Yes, I did. I enjoyed going to parks as a child because I could play on the swings and meet my friends, and the open space made me feel free.

제안: Kelime seçimi ve dilbilgisi hatalı (‘funny’ uygun değil). Net bir görüş belirtin ve nedenini açıklayın. Bağlaçlarla gerekçenizi bağlayın ve bir veya iki destekleyici detay verin.

예시: Yes, I still like going to parks because they help me relax after work, and I often go for a short walk or sit and read under a tree.

제안: Cümleler düzensiz ve eksik, anlam belirsiz. Doğrudan soruyu yanıtlayıp nedenini açıklayın; örneğin çocuklar için güvenli oyun alanları veya yeşil alanların faydalarından bahsedin. Bağlaçlarla fikirlerinizi düzenli şekilde sunun.

예시: Yes, I would. I think more parks would be great because they provide safe play areas for children and improve air quality in the city, so families would benefit.

제안: Cevap karışık ve belirsiz; hem dilbilgisi hem de içerik eksik. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın (evet/hayır) ve eğer belirli bir park istiyorsanız açıkça ismini ve nedenini verin. Eğer bir fabrika parkından söz ediyorsanız, bunu açıklayın; bağlaçlarla cümleleri genişletin.

예시: Not really. I don't have a specific park in mind, but I would like to visit any large botanical garden in the future because I enjoy seeing different plants and relaxing walks.

× Yes, I like.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks.

The student used simple present 'I like' which does not match the past reference in the question 'as a child'. Use past tense 'liked' and include the verb phrase 'going to parks' for clarity. Suggestion: pay attention to time markers in the question and choose past tense when referring to childhood.

× Yes, I think Park funny.

✓ Yes, I think parks are fun now.

The original sentence lacks plural agreement and a linking verb. 'Park' should be plural 'parks' to match general meaning, and 'funny' is a wrong adjective choice; use 'fun' to mean enjoyable. Add the verb 'are' for present simple 'I think parks are fun now.' Suggestion: include the correct copula and choose appropriate adjective meaning.

× Yes, I like I think parks beautiful children's. Park nice.

✓ Yes, I like them. I think parks are beautiful for children. Parks are nice.

The original contains fragmented clauses and missing pronouns and verbs. 'I like' needs an object 'them' referring to parks. 'Parks beautiful children's' misorders words and lacks 'are' and correct possessive structure; use 'beautiful for children'. 'Park nice' is fragmentary; complete with 'Parks are nice.' Suggestion: form complete sentences with subject + verb + complement, use pronouns to avoid repetition, and correct adjective phrases.

× No, I didn't. I think Pashka factory.

✓ No, I don't. I think Pashka Factory is a park I'd like to visit.

The question asks about future desire 'Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?' The response 'No, I didn't' incorrectly uses past tense and is not appropriate. Use present 'I don't' or better 'No, I don't have any specific ones' or specify 'I think Pashka Factory is a park I'd like to visit.' Also capitalize proper noun 'Pashka Factory' and add a full clause. Suggestion: match tense to question (future/ present preferences) and provide full sentence with verb and object.