Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms. Use linking words like 'because' correctly.

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they had many playgrounds and rides. For example, I used to spend hours on the swings and slides with my friends, which made those days very special.

제안: Give a clear, grammatical response with one or two specific reasons. Remove hesitations and correct verb forms. Use a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'so') to connect your reason.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax after work. For instance, I often take a 30-minute walk there to clear my mind and unwind.

제안: Answer directly and add a specific reason with correct grammar and linking words. Correct noun forms and use one or two supporting details rather than repeating phrases.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because we only have three parks in my district. More parks would give people easier access to green space for relaxing and playing sports.

제안: Give a concise statement of your intention, then provide one clear specific reason. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases. Use linking words like 'because' and give a short example of what you want to do there.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit Disneyland Park in the future because it features many characters from my favorite movies. I especially want to see the parades and meet some characters in person.

× Yeah, I'm very, very excited and very happy to go to the park and try because in the park there are many games and I love it.

✓ Yes, I was very excited and happy to go to the park and try the rides because there were many games there and I loved it.

The question asks about childhood (past), so present tense 'I'm' and 'I love' are incorrect. Use past tense 'was' and 'loved'. Also 'try' should be 'try the rides' for clarity and 'there are many games' should be 'there were many games there' to match past time reference. Grammar problem type's ID: 6

× Yes, I'm still like going to the park umm, now, because when are up to working and I go to the park, I do too relax and I can go to the yeah, Is it the way I found uh, this way?

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park now, because when I finish work I go to the park to relax and it helps me unwind.

The original mixes tenses and has missing subjects. Use present simple 'I still like' for current habit. Replace 'when are up to working' with 'when I finish work'. 'I do too relax' should be 'to relax'. Remove filler words and unclear phrases to produce a correct, natural sentence. Grammar problem type's ID: 6

× Yes, I love it and I want to. There are three park in the district. It's the 8th district because people can get there to go relax and playing game.

✓ Yes, I love it and I want more parks. There are three parks in the district. It's the 8th district because people can get there to relax and play games.

Use plural 'parks' to agree with 'three'. 'to go relax and playing game' mixes forms: use the infinitive 'to relax' and base verb 'play' with plural 'games' for general activities. Also clarify 'I want more parks' to complete the idea. Grammar problem type's ID: 1

× I want to I want to go to the Disneyland, Disneyland park in the future because in the Disneyland park we have too many character in the movie film and I love it and I want to see them once in my like.

✓ I want to go to Disneyland, the Disneyland park, in the future because the park has many characters from the movies and I would love to see them at least once in my life.

Do not use 'the' before proper name 'Disneyland' in general; when specifying 'the Disneyland park' use 'the'. 'Too many character' should be 'many characters' (plural). 'Movie film' is redundant; 'movies' is sufficient. 'Once in my like' should be 'at least once in my life'. Also use 'would love' for a future desire politely. Grammar problem type's ID: 22

× There are three park in the district. It's the 8th district because people can get there to go relax and playing game.

✓ There are three parks in the district. It's the 8th district because people can get there to relax and play games.

Use preposition 'in' correctly with 'district'. Replace 'to go relax' with 'to relax' and 'playing game' with 'play games' to use the correct verb forms and prepositions for purpose and activity. This entry overlaps plural error but focuses on prepositions and verb forms. Grammar problem type's ID: 11