Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a clear, direct topic sentence about liking parks, correct basic grammar, avoid repetition, and add one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Use simple past for childhood and connect ideas with linking words (e.g., "because", "so", "for example"). Keep it to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because I spent my free time there with my parents. For example, every Saturday we had a family picnic and I played games on the grass. Those visits were much more fun than staying at home playing video games.

제안: Answer directly and use correct tense: if you mean currently you don't go, use present simple. Give a clear reason and one brief detail using linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

예시: Not really — I don't go to parks now because I am very busy studying every day. As a result, I rarely have free time to visit a park.

제안: Respond clearly to the question (yes/no or a short opinion), use correct subject-verb agreement, and give specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example", "also") and limit to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because parks provide free space for exercise and relaxation. For example, many people already use existing parks for jogging, fishing and walking, so more parks would improve residents' quality of life.

제안: Make your intention clear: say whether you want to visit parks and why. Use simple, correct sentences and specific details (which park or activity). Use linking words and avoid unclear phrases. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit peaceful parks in the future where I can jog and read. For instance, a quiet park with benches and running paths would be perfect for my exercise and studying breaks.

× I really like going apart because it's had my free time with my parents.

✓ I really liked going to parks because I spent my free time with my parents.

The student used 'apart' instead of 'a park' or 'parks' and wrong tense/structure 'it's had my free time'. This is a sentence structure and word choice error. Use past tense 'liked' to match 'as a child' and plural 'parks' if speaking generally. Use 'spent my free time' as the correct verb phrase.

× Sometime I play video game in my house.

✓ Sometimes I played video games at home.

The student used singular 'video game' and 'Sometime' incorrectly. 'Sometimes' (adverb) and plural 'video games' are correct for general repeated action in the past. Use 'played' to match past context and 'at home' is the usual preposition.

× It's boring and.

✓ It was boring.

Fragment 'It's boring and.' is incomplete. Use a complete clause 'It was boring' to express past feeling. Match past tense used for childhood.

× In Saturday we go apart with my family and picnic, uh.

✓ On Saturdays we went to the park with my family and had a picnic.

Use 'on Saturdays' for days of the week (plural for habitual past), 'went to the park' not 'go apart', and 'had a picnic' for correct verb collocation. Also use past tense for childhood events.

× No, I didn't go in the park.

✓ No, I don't go to the park now.

The examiner asked about now; the student used past negative 'didn't go' which conflicts with present reference. Use present simple 'don't go to the park now' and correct preposition 'to'.

× I don't have a time to learn.

✓ I don't have time to study.

Use 'time' without the indefinite article and 'study' (more natural) instead of 'learn'. Also use present simple for habitual situation.

× I learning every day is no more time to go at the park.

✓ I study every day, so I don't have time to go to the park.

Use correct verb form 'I study' (present simple) rather than 'I learning'. Connect clauses with 'so' to show result. Use 'have time' and preposition 'to the park'.

× Yeah, it's my hometown.

✓ Yes, it's my hometown.

'Yeah' is informal; 'Yes' is more appropriate for a test. This is stylistic rather than strictly grammatical, but improves register.

× It have a lot of park, a lot of park to go, and some people has going to park, then it's running and fishing, maybe walk out in the park because it's still free.

✓ There are a lot of parks to visit, and some people go to the park to run, fish, or walk because it is free.

Multiple errors: use 'There are' for plural existence, plural 'parks', 'go' not 'has going', correct verbs 'run, fish, or walk' (parallel structure), and 'it is free' for clarity. This fixes subject-verb agreement and prepositions.

× I don't like a park to where I would go in the future because I am legend, like jogging and I like reading and play.

✓ I don't have a specific park I want to go to in the future because I usually jog, read, and play video games at home.

The original has unclear pronoun/reference 'a park to where', 'I am legend' (nonsense), and wrong verb forms 'like reading and play'. Rephrase to express meaning: no specific park, and list hobbies with parallel verbs 'jog, read, play'.

× Video game is my house.

✓ Video games are at my house.

Use plural 'video games' and correct verb 'are' to describe location. Original lacks clear meaning; this correction keeps intended idea that video games are at home.

× It's my house and I started learning for all time.

✓ It's my home, and I study all the time.

Use present simple 'I study' for habitual action, 'all the time' instead of 'for all time', and 'home' is more natural than 'house' here.

× It's the many time to go in there.

✓ I don't have much time to go there.

The phrase is incorrect. Use 'much time' (uncountable) in negative statements and 'go there' with correct preposition. This clarifies meaning: lack of time to visit parks.