Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap doğal ama dağınık; gereksiz selamlaşma ve tekrarlardan kaçının. Konuyu doğrudan ele alın (kısa bir konu cümlesi), ardından 1–2 destekleyici detay ekleyin: nerede oynadığınız, hangi aktiviteleri yaptığınız veya neden keyifli olduğunu belirtin. Bağlaçlar (for example, because, and) kullanarak akışı iyileştirin. Cümle sayısını 3–4’te tutun.

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they were safe places to play with friends. For example, we often played football and had picnics under big trees, which helped me make lasting friendships.

제안: Cevap doğrudan fakat biraz kaba ve kısır. Daha akıcı ve doğal olması için bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın, sonra neden az gittiğinizi ve bazen gitme durumunu belirten bir veya iki detay ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (because, although, sometimes) kullanın ve konuşma tonunu düzgün tutun.

예시: Not really, because I'm busier now with work and other responsibilities. However, I sometimes visit parks on weekends to relax and enjoy fresh air when I have free time.

제안: Cevap olumlu ve net ama kısa; puan artırmak için sebepler ve olası faydalar ekleyin. Bir konu cümlesi kurup sonra nedenlerini (sağlık, sosyal hayat, çevre) ve bir örnek ekleyin. Bağlaçlarla mantıklı akış sağlayın.

예시: Yes, I would love to see more parks in my city because they improve people's health and provide green spaces for families. For instance, new parks could offer playgrounds and walking paths that encourage exercise and community events.

제안: Cevap dürüst fakat zayıf; daha güçlü bir yanıt için özel tercihler veya kriterler belirtin (örneğin büyük göletli, yürüyüş parkuru veya çocuk etkinlikleri). Bu, konuşmayı zenginleştirir ve sınavda daha iyi izlenim verir. Ayrıca kibar isteği kısa tutun ve ardından kendi tercihlerinizi ekleyin.

예시: I don't have a specific park in mind, but I'd like to visit one with a lake and walking trails because I enjoy jogging and birdwatching. If you can recommend any parks with these features, I would be keen to try them out.

× Yes, hi there. I really love the way that I make connections with people and yeah, I really loved it.

✓ Yes. I really loved making connections with people, and I enjoyed going to parks.

The sentence mixes present simple ('I really love') with past simple ('I really loved it') inconsistently when referring to childhood. Use past tense to describe past habits and experiences. Also the phrase 'the way that I make connections with people' is awkward for past experience; use the gerund 'making' or past construction. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (past) and use gerund to describe activities: 'I loved making connections with people.' This keeps meaning clear and matches the timeframe of the question.

× Not really to be honest cause I'm older now and I don't really go there but I used to love it.

✓ Not really, to be honest, because I'm older now and I don't go there much, but I used to love going to parks.

This sentence mixes present ('I don't really go there') and past ('I used to love it') appropriately, but needs clearer punctuation and an explicit object for 'it'. Use 'because' instead of informal 'cause', insert commas, and add 'going to parks' for clarity. Also 'don't really go there' can be more natural as 'don't go there much.' Suggestion: use full 'because' in speaking transcripts and include precise nouns.

× Of course I would love to see more parks in my city.

✓ Of course, I would love to see more parks in my city.

Sentence is grammatically correct; only minor punctuation added for natural speech. No tense or agreement issues. Suggestion: include a comma after 'Of course' for clarity.

× Umm, I don't really have one in my mind but I would love the recommendations from you.

✓ Umm, I don't really have a particular park in mind, but I would love your recommendations.

The phrase 'one in my mind' is awkward; use 'a particular park in mind.' Also 'the recommendations from you' is a non-native structure; use 'your recommendations.' This corrects pronoun use and collocation. Suggestion: employ 'in mind' with 'a/any' and use possessive pronouns for recommendations.