Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và dùng cấu trúc trả lời trực tiếp. Tránh lặp câu hỏi của giám khảo; nên bắt đầu bằng câu trả lời rõ ràng (Yes/No) rồi giải thích ngắn. Chú ý số đếm (plural) và mạo từ: "parks" và "children". Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu, dùng liên từ như "because" để mở rộng ý.

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they had playgrounds and open spaces. I often played on the swings and rode my bike with friends. Those visits helped me enjoy outdoor activities and make memories.

제안: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, sửa lỗi mạo từ và động từ (giữ thì hiện tại). Trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng "Yes, I do" hoặc "No, I don't", sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn với lí do cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để liên kết ý.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are peaceful and good for exercise. I usually walk or run there a few times a week, which helps me relax and stay healthy.

제안: Cần trả lời trực tiếp với ý kiến rõ ràng (Yes/No) và nêu lí do cụ thể, có thể kèm đề xuất. Dùng cấu trúc có liên từ như "because" hoặc "so that" để làm rõ lợi ích. Tránh lặp câu hỏi nguyên văn; hãy dùng chủ ngữ và động từ rõ ràng.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide recreation spaces. More parks would encourage people to exercise and spend time outdoors, which benefits community health.

제안: Sửa ngữ pháp số đếm và trả lời trực tiếp: bắt đầu bằng "Yes" hoặc "No" rồi nêu tên hoặc loại công viên cụ thể bạn muốn đến. Thêm chi tiết về lý do và thời gian dự định nếu có. Dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để liên kết thông tin.

예시: Yes, I want to visit the central botanical garden next year because it has rare plant collections and peaceful walking trails. I plan to go in spring when the flowers are in full bloom so I can take photos and relax.

× Did you like going to park as a children?

✓ Did you like going to parks as a child?

The nouns 'park' and 'children' are incorrect in number for this sentence. 'Park' should be plural 'parks' or you can use 'the park' for a specific place; here the question asks generally, so 'parks' is appropriate. 'Children' is plural but the subject 'you' refers to one person in the exam, so use the singular noun 'child'. Suggestion: match singular/plural forms to meaning; use 'parks' for general activities and 'child' for the singular person.

× Do you still like going Park now?

✓ Do you still like going to parks now?

The phrase 'going Park' is missing the preposition 'to' and 'Park' should be plural or lowercased as a common noun. The present simple question 'Do you still like...' is correct, but the object must be 'going to parks' when speaking generally about parks. Suggestion: include the preposition 'to' after 'going' and use the correct noun form 'parks' for a general meaning.

× Would you like to see more parks in the city?

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?

The examiner's question used 'your city' which is natural when asking about the student's city. Using 'the city' can imply a specific city already mentioned, which may change meaning. The correction restores the intended meaning by using 'your city'. Suggestion: choose 'your' when asking about someone's own city; use 'the' only for a specific, previously identified city.

× Are there any park you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

The word 'park' should be plural 'parks' because 'any' is normally used with plural countable nouns when asking about multiple possibilities. Also 'Are there any parks you want to go to...' matches the plural noun with 'any'. Suggestion: use plural form after 'any' for countable nouns when asking generally.