Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., "No, I didn't") and then give one or two specific reasons or a brief example. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use past tense consistently and correct word order.

예시: No, I didn't. When I was a child I usually stayed at home because my family preferred indoor activities, so I rarely visited parks.

제안: Answer the question directly first, then give a specific reason and frequency. Remove questions back to the examiner and avoid hesitations. Use linking words like "nowadays" or "because" to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I do. Nowadays I often go to the park when I'm stressed because walking among trees helps me relax and clear my mind.

제안: Give a clear opinion first, then explain with one or two specific reasons. Improve grammar and sentence structure: use singular/plural correctly and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words like "however" or "because" to show contrast.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city. However, many urban areas in the Philippines focus on buildings rather than green spaces because of limited land and government priorities.

제안: State the specific park or country clearly and give one clear reason. Keep it concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Correct phrasing (e.g., "go to New Zealand", "there are more parks"). If mentioning study or preparation, explain briefly how it helps your plan.

예시: Yes. I would like to visit New Zealand because it has many beautiful parks and natural areas. I'm studying English now to prepare for traveling and to communicate more easily when I visit.