Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and concise, correct grammar (plural/singular, verb forms), and add one specific detail. Use a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail with a linking word.

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my family on weekends for picnics and sometimes cycling, which I enjoyed because it gave us time to play games and relax together.

제안: Fix verb tenses and word choice, be specific about activities, and use a linking word to connect ideas. Keep it to two to three concise sentences.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks on weekends. For example, I go jogging with friends and sometimes sit under a tree to relax after studying.

제안: Correct vocabulary and grammar (use 'parks' and avoid 'plastic area'), state one clear reason and include a linking word. Be specific about what kind of parks you want and why.

예시: Yes, I would. I hope there will be more small neighborhood parks near my home because currently I sometimes spend up to four hours traveling to reach one, and having nearby green spaces would make it easier to exercise and relax.

제안: Use correct place names and grammar, be specific about which park and why, and avoid mixing different parks. Provide a clear topic sentence and one reason with linking words.

예시: In the future, I would like to visit Central Park in New York, because I have never been to the United States and I would love to have a picnic there with my friends and family while exploring the city.

× Yes I did. I like to go to park with my families, especially on the weekend.

✓ Yes, I did. I like to go to the park with my family, especially on weekends.

Article errors and plural forms: 'to park' needs the definite article 'the' because a specific place type (park) is being referred to in general. 'my families' is incorrect; use the uncountable or collective noun 'my family' to refer to a single family unit. 'on the weekend' is acceptable but more natural in general statements as 'on weekends'. Suggestion: use 'the' before 'park', use singular 'family' for one household, and pluralize time expressions when speaking generally ('on weekends').

× We like to spend our time in the park for picnic and sometimes cycling together.

✓ We like to spend our time in the park having a picnic and sometimes cycling together.

Preposition and verb form: 'for picnic' is incorrect; use 'having a picnic' or 'for a picnic'. 'in the park' is correct. Suggestion: use a gerund phrase 'having a picnic' or add the article 'a' with 'picnic' to make the noun phrase correct.

× Yes I do. I still like to go to park on the weekend, especially jogging and landing with my friends, and sometimes I went to the park to relax after studying.

✓ Yes, I do. I still like to go to the park on weekends, especially to go jogging and walking with my friends, and sometimes I go to the park to relax after studying.

Multiple errors: 'to park' needs the definite article 'the'. 'on the weekend' -> 'on weekends' for habitual action. 'especially jogging and landing' uses wrong verb 'landing' (wrong lexical choice) and missing infinitive or preposition; better as 'to go jogging and walking'. 'and sometimes I went' mixes past tense 'went' with present habitual context; use present 'I go'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent for habitual actions and use correct verbs ('walking') and articles.

× Yes I would. I would like to see more park and plastic area nearby my city and close to my house.

✓ Yes, I would. I would like to see more parks and public recreational areas near my city and close to my house.

Article and word choice: 'more park' should be plural 'more parks' when referring to multiple facilities. 'plastic area' is likely a wrong word; use 'public recreational areas' or 'green spaces'. 'nearby my city' is awkward; use 'near my city' or 'nearby' before noun. Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns and choose appropriate vocabulary for intended meaning.

× Sometime I have to spend 4 hours to go to the park, so I think that it would be great if we have more park nearby my area.

✓ Sometimes I have to spend four hours to get to a park, so I think it would be great if we had more parks near my area.

Tense and article issues: 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'. Use 'to get to a park' for natural phrasing. For hypothetical wish about availability, use past subjunctive/conditional 'if we had' rather than 'if we have'. 'more park' -> 'more parks'. Suggestion: use 'sometimes', use conditional 'had' for unreal present, and pluralize countable nouns.

× For the future, I would like to go Senton Park in United States, because I never go to United States before, and I hope that I will go to picnic and spend my time on the Central Park with my friends and my family.

✓ In the future, I would like to go to Senton Park in the United States, because I have never been to the United States before, and I hope that I will go on a picnic and spend time in Central Park with my friends and family.

Verb form and article errors: 'never go' should be present perfect 'have never been' when referring to past experience. 'United States' needs the definite article 'the'. 'go to picnic' is incorrect; use 'go on a picnic'. 'the Central Park' should be 'Central Park' without 'the' or 'in Central Park' (Central Park is a specific named park so 'in Central Park' is natural). Suggestion: use present perfect for life experiences, include 'the' with 'United States', use 'go on a picnic', and correct place phrasing.