Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: คำตอบของคุณไม่ชัดเจนและเป็นประโยคคำถามซ้ำกับผู้สอบ ควรตอบโดยตรง เริ่มด้วยประโยคหัวข้อแล้วให้รายละเอียดสั้นๆ ใช้คำที่ถูกต้อง (park ไม่ใช่ shower) และหลีกเลี่ยงความคลุมเครือ

예시: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often played on the swings and had picnics with my family, which made weekends very fun.

제안: ประโยคตอบมีความเข้าใจได้แต่มีข้อผิดพลาดด้านไวยากรณ์และรูปแบบ (เช่น 'to going' ผิด) ควรตอบตรง ๆ ด้วยประโยคหัวข้อแล้วเสริมเหตุผลโดยใช้ linking word เช่น 'because' หรือ 'and' และจำกัดไม่เกิน 3-4 ประโยค

예시: Yes, I still like going to parks because they are peaceful and green. I usually go for a walk or read a book there, which helps me relax after a busy day.

제안: คำตอบมีความตั้งใจชัดเจนแต่ภาษาและความหมายสับสน ('the park have three and three will make oxygen' ไม่ชัดเจน) ควรใช้โครงสร้างที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'I'd like more parks because...' และให้เหตุผลที่เป็นรูปธรรม เช่น เพื่อสุขภาพ/สิ่งแวดล้อม โดยใช้ linking words เช่น 'because' หรือ 'so'

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide space for exercise. More parks would encourage people to spend time outdoors and lead healthier lives.

제안: คำตอบไม่ชัดเจนและมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์ ควรตอบโดยตรงว่า 'Yes' หรือ 'No' แล้วให้เหตุผลสั้น ๆ ใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'I don't know if there will be new parks' และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้วลีกำกวมอย่าง 'in my feel'

예시: No, there aren't any specific parks I plan to visit because I don't know if any new parks will open soon. However, I might visit a new park if one opens near my home.

× Did you like going to the park as a shower?

✓ Did you like going to the park as a child?

The student used 'shower' which is the wrong word; the intended noun is 'child'. This is a vocabulary error rather than grammar, but it affects pronoun/reference clarity. Suggestion: use 'child' when referring to childhood. In English, 'as a child' is the correct expression.

× Do you still like going to the park now? Yes, I like to going to the park because it's beautiful.

✓ Do you still like going to parks now? Yes, I like going to the park because it's beautiful.

Two issues: the question originally asked 'parks' (plural) so corrected question keeps plural; in the student's answer, 'to going' is incorrect. Use either 'I like going to the park' or 'I like to go to the park'. Suggestion: remove 'to' before the -ing form: 'like going' or use infinitive without -ing: 'like to go'.

× Would you like to see more park in your city? Yes, I'd like to see more park in my city because the park have three and three will make oxygen to the world.

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city? Yes, I'd like to see more parks in my city because the parks have trees and trees produce oxygen for the world.

Several problems: 'park' should be plural 'parks' when talking about more than one (singular/plural). 'the park have' has subject-verb agreement and article issues: 'the parks have' or 'parks have'. Also 'three' was likely 'trees'; 'three' is wrong word choice. Use 'produce oxygen' or 'release oxygen' rather than 'make oxygen to the world'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for 'more parks', ensure subject-verb agreement ('parks have'), and use correct vocabulary 'trees' and correct verb 'produce' and preposition 'for the world'.

× Are there any park you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

When asking about existence with 'any', a plural noun is required: 'any parks'. Also the structure 'Are there any ...?' requires plural or uncountable noun. Suggestion: use 'parks' here.

× No because I don't know will have new park in the future or not. But I don't want to go to the park yet in my feel.

✓ No, because I don't know whether there will be a new park in the future or not. But I don't want to go to the park yet, in my opinion.

Original has incorrect question-word order 'I don't know will have' — in English use 'whether there will be'. Also 'new park' needs an article 'a' unless plural. 'Yet in my feel' is incorrect; use 'yet' with a comma and 'in my opinion' or 'I don't feel like going yet'. Suggestion: use 'whether there will be' for uncertainty about future existence, include articles, and replace 'in my feel' with 'in my opinion' or 'I don't feel like it yet'.