Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Сделайте ответ грамматически правильным и более естественным: используйте прошедшее время (liked), уберите лишние повторения и добавьте короткую деталь. Например, начните с темы, затем укажите причину или воспоминание. Максимум 3–4 предложения.

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. I often went there with my family and enjoyed eating ice cream on the benches. I especially liked watching the ducks in the pond.

제안: Сделайте ответ более связным и грамматически корректным: используйте настоящее простое/прогрессивное (I go / I like going), уберите повторения и уточните с кем вы ходите. Добавьте одно предложение с причиной или примером.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I often go there with my parents and sometimes with friends, because it is a peaceful place to walk and talk.

제안: Сформулируйте пожелание грамматически правильно и добавьте причину: используйте условные структуры или модальные глаголы (I would like to have…), добавьте конкретику — например, какие элементы парков вы хотели бы видеть.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more and larger parks in my city. More green spaces with playgrounds and benches would make the city nicer and provide places for families to relax.

제안: Сделайте ответ чётким и грамматически правильным: укажите конкретные места (например, national parks or famous theme parks), объясните почему вы хотите их посетить, избегайте повтора «want to / would like».

예시: Yes, I would like to visit some famous American parks in the future, such as Yellowstone and the Grand Canyon. I want to see the unique landscapes and go hiking there.

× When I was a child, I like go going to park and I like eat ice cream to the park.

✓ When I was a child, I liked going to parks and I liked eating ice cream in the park.

The sentence describes a past habit, so the verb tense should be past ('liked' rather than 'like'). 'Like go going' contains a redundant and incorrect form; the correct verb pattern is 'liked going' (verb + -ing). 'to park' should be pluralized to 'parks' or use 'the park' depending on meaning; here 'parks' fits general childhood visits. 'I like eat' is incorrect; use 'liked eating' (verb + -ing). Also, use 'in the park' rather than 'to the park' when describing eating there. Suggestion: Use past simple for habitual actions in the past and use gerund after 'like/liked'.

× Yes, I go and I go to going to park with my family is my parents.

✓ Yes, I go to parks with my family; they are my parents.

The original mixes present simple and incorrect gerund and an unclear clause. For current routines, use present simple: 'I go to parks with my family.' Remove redundant words: 'I go and I go to going to' is incorrect. The clause 'is my parents' is not grammatically connected; replace with a clear pronoun: 'they are my parents' or simply 'with my parents.' Suggestion: Keep present simple for habitual actions and use a clear subject for the second clause.

× Yes, I would like in my city be big parks and many parks.

✓ Yes, I would like there to be larger and more parks in my city.

When expressing a desire about existence, use the construction 'there to be' after 'would like': 'I would like there to be...'. 'be big parks and many parks' is awkward and repetitive; use 'larger and more parks' or 'bigger and more parks.' Also include 'in my city' at the end for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'would like there to be' plus a clear adjective and quantifier.

× Yes, I want to I would like go going to and American parks attractions.

✓ Yes, I want to go to American parks and attractions in the future.

The sentence combines 'want to' and 'would like' redundantly; choose one and use the correct verb form: 'want to go' or 'would like to go.' 'go going to' is incorrect; use 'go to.' The word order 'and American parks attractions' is wrong; use 'American parks and attractions.' Add 'in the future' to match the question about future plans. Suggestion: Use a single modal expression and the infinitive 'to go' and coordinate nouns properly.