Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答没有真正回答问题，只是复述了考官的话。建议直接陈述观点（是/否），并补充一到两句具体细节，例如你喜欢做什么活动、与谁去、公园给你的感受等。答案不宜过长，控制在最多五句，并使用连接词使表达连贯。

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went there with my parents and played on the swings and slides. The open space made me feel free and I remember having picnics with my family. Those visits helped me enjoy being outdoors and stay active.

제안: 你的回答仍然只是重复问题，未给出任何信息。建议直接回答（是/否），并给出原因或频率，例如你现在是否经常去公园、去公园做什么，并用连接词（because, so, therefore等）组织内容。

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually visit once or twice a week to jog and relax because it helps me relieve stress. Sometimes I meet friends there for a walk, which is a good way to catch up and stay healthy.

제안: 你的回答只是重复问题，没有表达观点或理由。建议明确表明你是否希望看到更多公园，并说明原因，例如改善环境、提供休闲空间或增加运动场所。使用连接词（for example, because, so）补充细节。

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide spaces for exercise. For example, more small parks in residential areas would give families a nearby place to relax. This would also encourage people to spend time outdoors instead of staying indoors.

제안: 你的回答仍然是重复问题，未提供任何信息。建议直接回答并给出具体目标，例如想去的公园名字或类型（国家公园、主题公园等），以及原因或计划（when/how）。尽量用一到三句补充细节并使用连接词。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the national park near my city next year because it has beautiful hiking trails. I plan to go there in spring when the weather is pleasant, so I can enjoy the scenery and take photos. It would be a nice break from the city.

× Do you like going to parks as a child?

✓ Did you like going to parks as a child?

原句用现在时“Do you like”与时间状语“as a child”（作为孩子时）不一致。询问过去习惯性动作时应使用一般过去时，因此把动词改为过去时“Did”。建议：遇到明确指过去时间的短语（如 as a child, when I was young）时，用过去时。

× Do you still like going to parks now?

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now.

原句是对考官问题的重复而非回答。这里需要给出陈述句作为回答。若保持时态，应使用一般现在时并加上主语和动词构成完整句子，例如“Yes, I still like...” 建议：回答问题时不要照搬问题句，直接用完整的陈述句回答并注意主语。

× Would you like to see more parks in your city?

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.

原句是对考官问题的重复而非回答。作为回应，应使用情态动词 would 与主语构成完整回答，例如“Yes, I would like to see...” 建议：用完整句回应情态疑问句，包含主语和动词。

× Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

✓ Yes, there are some parks I would like to visit in the future.

学生重复了问题而没有给出回答。原问题含有将来意向，回答中应使用“would like to”或“want to”并把句子构成完整的陈述句。建议：用完整句表达意愿或计划，注意时态和礼貌表达（would like to 更礼貌）。