Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tense (use past for childhood) and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, I used to play on the swings and explore the flower beds, which gave me fresh air and a calm atmosphere.

제안: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use present simple for current habits, and a linking word to connect ideas. Be specific about frequency and what you enjoy seeing.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually visit a nearby park twice a week to get fresh air and see the well-planned flowerbeds and trees.

제안: Be concise and natural. Answer directly, then give a brief reason with specific detail. Correct collocations (e.g., 'I come from' not 'I belong to', 'many parks' rather than 'much parks').

예시: Yes, I would like more parks in my city. Although Chandigarh already has many green spaces, more small neighborhood parks would make the city even more pleasant and accessible.

제안: Make your answer specific and grammatically correct. State the park name, its location, and one reason you want to visit. Use linking words for clarity.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit a park called Greenery Station in Haryana. I want to go because I have heard it has beautiful landscaped gardens and walking paths that are perfect for relaxing.

× Yes, I like going to the parks.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks.

The question asks about enjoyment 'as a child' (past time), so the verb tense should be past. Use 'liked' for past habitual actions and omit the definite article before plural 'parks' when speaking generally. Suggestion: Use past tense for childhood habits and avoid unnecessary articles.

× It gives me good environment and fresh air and good greenery scenes.

✓ They gave me a good environment, fresh air, and beautiful greenery.

Referencing parks (plural) requires plural pronoun 'they' and past tense 'gave' for childhood. Use 'a' before 'good environment' and parallel structure with commas. 'Good greenery scenes' is awkward; 'beautiful greenery' is more natural. Suggestion: Maintain subject-pronoun agreement and use parallel, natural adjective+noun phrases.

× So I prefer going to the park in my child.

✓ So I preferred going to parks when I was a child.

The speaker refers to a past period, so use past tense 'preferred' and the phrase 'when I was a child' to indicate time. Also use plural 'parks' for general habit. Suggestion: Use clear past-time expressions for childhood and correct phrasing 'when I was a child'.

× Yes, this time I still I go to the pass before this, give me a fresh air and good environment and greenery and see the much planned different flowers.

✓ Yes, even now I still go to parks; they give me fresh air, a good environment, greenery, and well-planned flower beds.

Mixes present and incorrect expressions. Use present simple 'I still go' for current habits. 'Pass before this' is incorrect; use 'parks'. Use plural 'they' for parks and articles before countable nouns ('a good environment'). 'Much planned different flowers' is ungrammatical; 'well-planned flower beds' or 'different well-planned flowers' is natural. Suggestion: Use present simple for current routines, correct plural pronouns, and use natural noun phrases.

× Yes, there are many parks in my city.

✓ Yes, there are many parks in my city.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It correctly uses 'there are' with plural 'parks' to indicate existence. Suggestion: No change needed.

× I belong to the Chandigarh because Chandigarh is the very beautiful city and there are much parks in this area.

✓ I come from Chandigarh, because Chandigarh is a very beautiful city and there are many parks in the area.

Use 'come from' or 'am from' instead of 'belong to' for hometown. Do not use 'the' before proper noun 'Chandigarh'. Use the article 'a' with 'very beautiful city'. 'Much parks' is incorrect; use 'many parks'. Suggestion: Use natural expressions for origin, correct article usage with proper nouns, and use 'many' for countable plural nouns.

× Yes, I want to go my future in this park.

✓ Yes, in the future I want to visit this park.

The original mixes words incorrectly. For future intention, use 'in the future I want to visit' or 'I would like to visit'. 'Go my future in this park' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: Use 'in the future' and verbs like 'visit' or 'go to' followed by the park.

× This park name is Greenery Station, it located in Haryana.

✓ This park is called Greenery Station; it is located in Haryana.

Use 'is called' for names and include the verb 'is' before 'located'. The original lacks a verb and misuses sentence punctuation. Split into two clauses or join properly with a semicolon. Suggestion: Say 'This park is called X' and 'it is located in Y' to form complete sentences.

× I like this part.

✓ I like this park.

Likely a typo: 'part' should be 'park' to match context. Pronoun 'this' is fine. Suggestion: Correct spelling to 'park' to convey meaning.