Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接表达了喜欢拍照的观点，但句子没有说完，且存在明显用词和语法问题。 “in my travel time”应改为“when I travel”，“for different buildings”可以改为“of different buildings”，“previous”不符合语境，应使用“precious”或“meaningful”。建议用“观点 + 原因 + 具体例子”的结构，并避免重复使用“very”。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel. I often photograph interesting buildings because they help me remember the places I have visited. For example, I took many pictures of the traditional architecture during my last trip.

제안: 回答有明确观点，也给出了新鲜空气和自然景观两个理由，但最后一句没有完成，且“very enjoying enjoyable”表达错误。“enjoying”不能这样修饰事物，应使用“enjoyable”；“we can live there”与问题中的“views”衔接不自然。建议减少重复，加入一个具体对比或例子，使答案更完整、连贯。

예시: I definitely prefer rural views because I enjoy the fresh air and natural landscapes. Compared with cities, the countryside is usually quieter and less crowded. For instance, I love looking at green hills and rivers when I visit rural areas.

제안: 回答表达了偏好其他国家景色的观点，但“wheels”应改为“views”，“for the travel”应改为“when I travel”，“It's mixed”与前面的观点矛盾且含义不清。建议使用“when I travel abroad”或“views in other countries”，并通过“because”解释原因，再提供一个具体例子；同时避免重复“very”和“enjoy”。

예시: I prefer views in other countries because they offer experiences that are new and different for me. I especially enjoy seeing unfamiliar architecture, landscapes, and local traditions. For example, I would love to visit Switzerland to admire its mountains and lakes.

× Yes, of course if I'm in my travel time, I definitely take many pictures for different buildings because it's very very previous for me to take my time and

✓ Yes, of course. When I'm traveling, I definitely take many pictures of different buildings because taking pictures is very important to me.

“pictures for different buildings”中的介词使用不正确。表示“拍某物的照片”时，应使用“pictures of something”，而不是“pictures for something”。“in my travel time”也不自然，可以改为“When I'm traveling”。

× Yes, of course if I'm in my travel time, I definitely take many pictures for different buildings because it's very very previous for me to take my time and

✓ Yes, of course. When I'm traveling, I definitely take many pictures of different buildings because taking pictures is very valuable to me.

“previous”表示“以前的、先前的”，不能表示“珍贵的”或“重要的”。这里应使用“valuable”或“important”。另外，英语中不应重复使用“very very”来加强语气，通常使用“very valuable”或“extremely valuable”。

× Yes, of course if I'm in my travel time, I definitely take many pictures for different buildings because it's very very previous for me to take my time and

✓ Yes, of course. When I'm traveling, I definitely take many pictures of different buildings because taking pictures is very important to me.

句子以连词“and”结尾，但后面没有继续完整的内容，导致句子结构不完整。回答时应删除句末的“and”，并确保句子有完整的意思。

× I think it's definitely rural areas because I like the fresh air.

✓ I think rural areas are definitely better because I like the fresh air.

“rural areas”是复数，不能和单数形式“it's”搭配。可以使用复数谓语“are”，或者直接改为“I prefer rural areas”。

× I think this is this is very enjoying enjoyable things we can live there and

✓ I think they are very enjoyable places to live in.

“enjoying”通常表示“正在享受”，不能用来表示某个地方或事物“令人愉快”。这里应使用形容词“enjoyable”。同时，“this”不能直接指代复数名词“things”，所以使用复数代词“they”更合适。

× I think this is this is very enjoying enjoyable things we can live there and

✓ I think they are very enjoyable places to live in.

句子中重复使用了“I think this is”，并且以“and”结尾，导致结构不完整。应删除重复部分，并补充完整的句子结构，例如“They are very enjoyable places to live in”。

× I think for the travel I prefer the wheels from other countries because it's very it's a new thing for me and I want to enjoy enjoy exotic things It's mixed.

✓ I think that when I travel, I prefer views from other countries because they are new to me, and I want to enjoy exotic things.

“the travel”不是自然的表达。表示“旅行时”可以说“When I travel”或“When traveling”，不需要使用“the”。

× I think for the travel I prefer the wheels from other countries because it's very it's a new thing for me and I want to enjoy enjoy exotic things It's mixed.

✓ I think that when I travel, I prefer views from other countries because they are new to me, and I want to enjoy exotic things.

这里的“views”是复数名词，因此不能使用单数代词“it”来指代，应使用复数代词“they”。同时，“they are new to me”比“it's a new thing for me”更符合前面的复数名词。

× I think for the travel I prefer the wheels from other countries because it's very it's a new thing for me and I want to enjoy enjoy exotic things It's mixed.

✓ I think that when I travel, I prefer views from other countries because they are new to me, and I want to enjoy exotic things. It's a mix of different experiences.

“because it's very it's a new thing”中出现了重复和不完整的结构，导致句子无法正确表达意思。应删除重复部分，并使用完整结构“because they are new to me”。“enjoy enjoy”也是重复，应只保留一个“enjoy”。