Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct grammar and tighten your answer. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail and a linking phrase. Avoid repeating words and keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially during my commute. For example, when I ride the bus home I often photograph the changing skyline and sunsets because the colors and light are different each day. This habit helps me notice small changes in my city and relax after work.

제안: Make the preference clear, correct grammar, and use linking words to add one or two specific reasons. Use natural collocations (e.g., "I prefer rural areas," "it helps me relax"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy natural scenery. For instance, I like listening to birds and seeing rivers and mountains, which help me relax and escape the noise of the city.

제안: Be specific and avoid repetition. State your preference clearly, then give 1–2 concrete examples of places or features and explain why they appeal to you. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., "scenic landscapes," "diverse natural attractions").

예시: I prefer the views in my own country because Taiwan has very scenic landscapes. For example, the mountainous national parks and winding rivers offer diverse natural attractions that are easy to visit and remind me of home.

× Yes, I like to taking picture with daily views when I taking bus and going home.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of everyday views when I take the bus home.

The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form, so use 'taking' not 'to taking' (Grammar Problem Type 8). 'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' (singular/plural issue, but only correct those listed; plural correction is included as it matches list 1). Use 'everyday' as an adjective before 'views'. 'I taking bus' is incorrect: after 'I' use the base verb 'take' in present tense ('I take the bus'). Also 'going home' is better expressed as 'home' after 'take the bus'. Suggestions: use 'like' + gerund, ensure noun number agreement, and use correct present tense for habitual actions.

× The views outside the bus different every day and the beautiful sunset, the different color brings me a pleasant feeling.

✓ The views outside the bus are different every day, and the beautiful sunset and changing colors bring me a pleasant feeling.

This sentence lacks the linking verb 'are' to form the present simple ('The views ... are different') (Grammar Problem Type 6). 'The beautiful sunset, the different color brings' has subject-verb agreement issues; multiple subjects ('sunset and changing colors') require plural verb 'bring' (also subject-verb agreement, Type 27). Use 'changing colors' or 'different colors' to be natural. Suggestions: include 'are' for descriptions in present simple and match verb number to the compound subject.

× I prefer few of rural areas.

✓ I prefer rural areas.

'Few' is used with countable nouns to mean 'not many' and needs an article or quantifier like 'a few' to mean 'some'. The phrase 'few of rural areas' is ungrammatical. The intended meaning is likely a general preference, so simply 'I prefer rural areas' is correct (Grammar Problem Type 14). Suggestion: use 'a few' to indicate small quantity or omit to express a general preference.

× I like the nature like birds, water, mountains it brings it always brings pleasant feeling for me and relieve me from the urban.

✓ I like nature, such as birds, water, and mountains; it always brings me a pleasant feeling and relieves me from urban life.

The original sentence is run-on and missing connectors/punctuation; it repeats 'it brings it always brings' and uses incorrect verb forms ('relieve me' should be 'relieves me') (Grammar Problem Type 26). 'The nature' is unnatural in English; use 'nature'. Parallel list items need commas and 'and'. Use semicolon or conjunction to connect clauses. Suggestions: break into clear clauses, use singular verb 'relieves' to agree with 'it' and maintain parallel structure.

× I do prefer views in my own country.

✓ I prefer views in my own country.

Using 'do' as an auxiliary for emphasis is possible, but in simple answers the plain present 'I prefer' is more natural. The auxiliary 'do' is unnecessary here and can sound emphatic (Grammar Problem Type 6). Suggestion: use simple present for preferences unless emphasizing contrast.

× We have mountains, rivers, very very good resource of nature and have a lot of different sites.

✓ We have mountains and rivers, very good natural resources, and many different sites.

'Very very good resource of nature' is ungrammatical and awkward; use 'natural resources' (plural) and avoid repeating 'very'. 'Have a lot of different sites' should be 'many different sites' for a more formal register (Grammar Problem Type 14). Also adjust word order and plural forms. Suggestions: use plural 'resources', limit 'very', and prefer 'many' over 'a lot of' in formal speech.