Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., "Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views") then give 1–2 specific reasons using correct tense and vocabulary. Avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases and reduce redundancy. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" to connect ideas and keep the answer to under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I love preserving memories of places I visit. For example, I keep a digital gallery of landscapes and cityscapes on my phone, so I can easily share them with friends when they ask.

제안: Answer the question directly (state urban or rural) with a clear reason and a brief example. Avoid filler words and unclear vocabulary. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect your reason. Keep to 1–3 concise sentences and be specific about what you like (e.g., buildings, nature, people).

예시: I prefer urban views because I like photographing architecture and busy streets. For example, when I visit a new city I focus on interesting buildings and street scenes that show local life.

제안: Give a direct answer (own country or other countries) and support it with a specific reason and an example. Use correct grammar (e.g., "I prefer views in my own country") and avoid vague phrases like "recommend all the tourists". Use linking words ("because", "for example"). Keep answer within 3 sentences.

예시: I prefer views in my own country because Nepal has diverse landscapes, from mountains to lakes. For example, when tourists come here I often take photos of the Himalayas and local villages to show how beautiful the country is.

× Yes, I like to taking pictures of different views because my old gallery are available in my oldest gold photos.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because my old gallery is available with my oldest golden photos.

Use 'like taking' not 'like to taking' because 'like' is followed by the gerund or the infinitive; here gerund is natural. 'Gallery are' is plural mismatch with 'gallery' (singular), so change to 'gallery is' (subject-verb agreement). 'Oldest gold photos' is awkward adjective use; 'golden photos' or 'oldest photos' is clearer; combined as 'oldest golden photos'. Suggestions: use 'I like taking...' and ensure subject-verb agreement and natural adjective order.

× That's why I want to recommend All the Peoples are talk today.

✓ That's why I want to recommend these pictures to all the people today.

Original sentence is ungrammatical: 'recommend All the Peoples are talk' mixes noun phrase and verb clause. Fix by specifying the object 'these pictures' and proper indirect object 'to all the people'. Use 'people' (not 'Peoples') for general plural and lowercase. Suggestion: decide the recommendation target and use 'recommend X to Y' structure.

× If you like all pictures and photos are recommended on your phones.

✓ If you like them, I can recommend the pictures to you on your phone.

Original mixes conditional clause and passive incorrectly. Use conditional 'If you like them' then main clause 'I can recommend the pictures to you on your phone.' Avoid unnecessary passive. Make pronoun reference clear ('them' refers to pictures).

× Yes, prefer beer in your belt Eraser ruler eras had so many uh, photography and those are available.

✓ Yes, I prefer views in towns because there are many photo spots available.

Original sentence contains irrelevant words ('beer in your belt Eraser ruler eras') and is incoherent. Recast to answer the examiner's question about preference: 'I prefer views in towns because there are many photo spots available.' Use clear subject and verb and logical vocabulary. Suggestion: stay on topic and avoid filler words.

× That's why I want to recommend all the people's umm, travelling.

✓ That's why I want to recommend travel to everyone.

'All the people's travelling' is incorrect noun phrasing. Use 'recommend travel to everyone' or 'recommend that everyone travel.' Ensure correct word order and target audience phrasing.

× If you travel umm, another city, another town, then you capture the four.

✓ If you travel to another city or town, then you can capture the scenery.

Missing preposition 'to' before locations and awkward phrase 'capture the four' unclear. Also need modal 'can' for possibility. Use 'capture the scenery' or 'take photos' to be clear. Suggestion: include 'to' with destination and use appropriate object.

× Yes, I prefer build in our own country because Nepal is a very beautiful country in the world.

✓ Yes, I prefer to travel within our own country because Nepal is a very beautiful country.

'Prefer build' is incorrect verb usage; likely intended 'prefer to be' or 'prefer to travel' — use 'prefer to travel within our own country.' 'In the world' is unnecessary after 'very beautiful country.' Suggestion: use 'prefer to travel within' or 'prefer staying in' depending on meaning.

× That's why I want to recommend all the tourists and people.

✓ That's why I want to recommend it to all tourists and people.

Missing object 'it' (the recommendation) and article usage: 'all tourists and people' needs clarity; 'all tourists' is sufficient. Use 'recommend it to all tourists.' Suggestion: include the thing being recommended and use correct indirect object structure.

× If you visit in Nepal then you will capturing the photo and some your friends and.

✓ If you visit Nepal, then you will capture photos with your friends.

Do not use 'visit in Nepal' — use 'visit Nepal.' 'Will capturing' mixes future auxiliary with gerund; use 'will capture.' 'Some your friends' is incorrect word order; use 'your friends.' Suggestions: remove unnecessary preposition, use 'will' + base verb, and correct adjective/noun order.