Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, avoid repetition and fillers, and organise your reply with a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words and correct grammar (e.g., plural/singular agreement and possessives).

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because each scene offers a unique perspective. For example, city skylines capture energy and architecture, while coastal views emphasise colour and light, so I often choose images that reflect my mood for my profile pictures.

제안: Start with a clear statement, fix grammar (use singular/plural and correct nouns), remove fillers, and give a specific reason with one concrete example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

예시: I prefer rural areas because they have lush greenery and peaceful backgrounds. For example, I like photographing rice fields at sunset because the warm light and open space create a calming, picturesque scene.

제안: Give a direct answer first, correct grammatical errors, avoid repetition, and provide a clear reason with a specific example or comparison. Use linking phrases like 'because' or 'however' to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different architecture and cultural scenes that I haven't photographed before. For instance, I would love to photograph the colourful markets in Morocco because they have vibrant textiles and unique street life unlike what I usually see at home.

× The different views give you different perspective.

✓ The different views give you different perspectives.

The noun 'perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' because it refers to multiple different viewpoints provided by multiple views. Use plural nouns when talking about more than one distinct instance. Suggestion: change singular countable nouns to plural when referring to multiple items (perspectives).

× Different views give you uh the full your full length image which you can use to put on profile pic of WhatsApp or or.

✓ Different views give you a full-length image that you can use as your WhatsApp profile picture.

The original sentence has redundancy ('the full your full'), missing articles, incorrect noun phrase order ('profile pic of WhatsApp'), and filler words. Fix by using 'a full-length image' (correct article and adjective order) and 'use as your WhatsApp profile picture' for correct preposition and noun usage. Suggestion: remove filler words, use one article, hyphenate compound adjective 'full-length', and use 'as' with 'profile picture'. Note: This matches 'Sentence structure errors' because multiple structural mistakes are present.

× Because rural areas has lot of greeneries and the background news looks very, uh, mesmerizing when you click the picture in rural areas.

✓ Because rural areas have a lot of greenery and the background looks very mesmerizing when you take pictures in rural areas.

There are several issues: 'rural areas' is plural, so verb should be 'have' not 'has' (subject-verb agreement). 'lot of greeneries' is ungrammatical: use 'a lot of greenery' or 'lots of green areas'; 'greenery' is an uncountable noun. 'background news' is incorrect collocation — likely intended 'background'. Also use 'take pictures' rather than 'click the picture' for natural English. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: Ensure subject and verb agree in number, use uncountable noun forms correctly ('greenery'), and use natural collocations ('background' not 'background news').

× Add preferred views in another country.

✓ I prefer views in another country.

The original sentence 'Add preferred views in another country.' is ungrammatical and likely contains a typo ('Add' instead of 'I'). Fix by using 'I prefer' to state preference. This is a sentence structure error because the subject and verb do not form a coherent clause. Suggestion: Begin with the subject 'I' followed by the correct verb 'prefer'. Note: This also aligns with 'Sentence structure errors' as defined.

× As I already have clicked lot of picture at multiple times in my countries but I usually get very little opportunity to click click picture in other countries.

✓ I have already taken many pictures in my country several times, but I usually get very few opportunities to take pictures in other countries.

Multiple errors: 'have clicked' is a literal translation; in English, use 'have taken' for photographs (present perfect). 'lot of picture' should be 'many pictures' or 'a lot of pictures' (plural and quantifier). 'at multiple times' is unnatural — use 'several times'. 'my countries' is wrong if referring to own country (singular) or else clarify; likely 'my country'. 'very little opportunity' should be 'very few opportunities' for countable plural. Also remove duplicated 'click click' and use 'take pictures' consistently. Suggestion: Use present perfect 'have taken' for experiences up to now, use correct quantifiers for countable nouns ('many', 'few'), and use natural time expressions ('several times').