Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答えをもっと明確にし、具体的な詳細や理由を付け加えると良いです。たとえば、どのような場面や被写体が好きか、どんな機材を使うか、写真を見返して何を感じるかなどを述べると印象が良くなります。また、一文が長くなり過ぎているので、短く分けて話す練習をしてください。接続語（for example, because, so）を使って論理的につなげましょう。

예시: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing landscapes and street scenes when I travel because they capture the atmosphere of a place. For example, I often take photos at sunrise or sunset and later review them to remember the colors and emotions of the trip.

제안: 冒頭で混乱を招く表現（"It's a different question"）は避け、直接的な答えを述べてください。理由をもう少し具体的に説明し、比較表現を使って明確にしましょう。また、接続詞（because, so, however）を適切に使い分け、文を二つに分けて聞き取りやすくしてください。

예시: I prefer rural areas because they offer quieter, more natural scenery than cities. Since I live in an urban area, I find rural views refreshing and unfamiliar, with wide fields and traditional villages that are great to photograph.

제안: 文法と語順のミス（"it's makes me excited"）を直し、具体的な理由や比較を加えて答えを豊かにしてください。どの点が自国の景色を好む理由なのか（文化的背景、親近感、季節の変化など）を挙げると説得力が増します。単文で終わらせず、接続詞で補足説明を加えましょう。

예시: I prefer landscapes in my own country because they feel familiar and full of cultural meaning. For example, I enjoy photographing traditional festivals and seasonal scenery at home, which often remind me of personal memories and local traditions.

× Yes I do, when I go travel I always take pictures and review it after the travel.

✓ Yes I do. When I go travelling I always take pictures and review them after the trip.

The phrase 'go travel' is not idiomatic in English; after 'go' use the gerund form 'go travelling' or 'go traveling' to indicate the activity (Grammar Problem Type 8). 'Pictures' is plural, so the pronoun referring to them must be plural 'them' (Grammar Problem Type 12). 'The travel' is unnatural; use 'the trip' or 'a trip' for correct noun choice and natural collocation.

× It's a different question, but I like rural areas better because I live in urban areas so I'm not familiar with rural views.

✓ That's a different question, but I prefer rural areas because I live in an urban area and I'm not familiar with rural views.

'It's a different question' is acceptable but 'That's a different question' is more natural (Grammar Problem Type 26). Use 'prefer' rather than 'like ... better' for concise expression. 'I live in urban areas' is awkward when referring to a single person's residence; use 'I live in an urban area' or 'I live in the city' (Grammar Problem Type 1). Also separate the clauses with 'and' and use the contraction 'I'm' consistently; 'so I'm not familiar' is acceptable but 'and I'm not familiar' connects the ideas more clearly.

× I prefer the country's landscape because it's makes me excited.

✓ I prefer my country's landscapes because they make me excited.

'The country's landscape' is ambiguous; if referring to the student's own country, 'my country's landscapes' is clearer and the plural 'landscapes' matches general reference (Grammar Problem Type 17 and 1). 'It's makes' mixes a contraction with a verb incorrectly; use 'they make' to agree with the plural subject (Grammar Problem Type 27 and 6). Alternatively, 'it makes me excited' can be used with a singular subject like 'the landscape'.