Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap doğal ancak birkaç dilbilgisi hatası ve fazlalık var. "have never I haven't seen before" gibi tekrarlamalar düzeltilmeli. Ayrıca tek cümleyle doğrudan cevap verildikten sonra 1-2 destekleyici ayrıntı eklenmeli; örneğin hangi tür manzaralar ilham veriyor veya hangi ekipmanı kullandığınız belirtilerek somutluk kazandırılabilir. Cümle sayısını 3-4 ile sınırlayarak daha akıcı ve etkili cevap verin.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially landscapes I haven't seen before. For example, I love photographing coastal sunsets because the colors and reflections make my photos more dramatic. I usually take my camera with a wide-angle lens to capture the whole scene.

제안: Cevap karışık ve bazı anlamsız ifadeler ("I like boats", "peaceful peaceful") var. Başlangıçta net bir tercih belirtilmeli; ardından bağlaçlarla kıyas yapılmalı (for example, whereas, while). Gereksiz kelime tekrarları kaldırılmalı ve açıklamalar daha spesifik olmalı (örneğin hangi şehir manzaraları veya hangi kırsal özellikler çekici).

예시: I prefer urban views for their dynamic architecture and street scenes, while I also enjoy rural landscapes for their tranquility. For example, city skylines at night show interesting lights and shapes, whereas countryside fields offer peaceful compositions with natural colors.

제안: Cevapta kelime hataları ve dolgu ifadeleri var ("wheels", "umm"). Net bir tercih belirtilmiş ancak nedenler daha özgün ve detaylı olmalı; örneğin farklı kültürlerin hangi görsel özelliklerini çekici bulduğunuzu açıklayın. Ayrıca örneği daha akıcı hale getirmek için gereksiz duraksamalardan kaçının.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because I love discovering unfamiliar landscapes and cultural landmarks. For example, I would like to visit Edinburgh to photograph its historic skyline and unique stone buildings, which reflect Scottish history and atmosphere.

× Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially places I have never I haven't seen before.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially places I haven't seen before.

The sentence contains a redundant clause 'I have never I haven't seen before' with mixed tenses and repeated subject. Use a single correct present perfect negative form 'I haven't seen before' to indicate experience up to now. Suggestion: remove the extra words and keep 'I haven't seen before.'

× In it depends on the place. I like boats. Urban areas I enjoy the vibrant still life and architecture, while in rural areas I appreciate the peaceful peaceful views and fresh air.

✓ It depends on the place. In urban areas I enjoy the vibrant street life and architecture, while in rural areas I appreciate the peaceful views and fresh air.

The original has fragmented clauses and misplaced phrases ('In it depends on the place', 'I like boats' unrelated). Correct structure requires a clear main clause 'It depends on the place.' 'Still life' is the term for art; for city atmosphere use 'street life'. Remove the repeated word 'peaceful' and the unrelated sentence 'I like boats' unless relevant. Suggestion: keep coherent sentences and remove unrelated fragments.

× I prefer wheels in other countries because I enjoy visiting places I haven't seen before and experiencing new cultures.

✓ I prefer visiting other countries because I enjoy seeing places I haven't seen before and experiencing new cultures.

The phrase 'I prefer wheels in other countries' misuses the noun 'wheels' and lacks the correct verb/preposition. Use 'I prefer visiting other countries' to express preference for travel. Also 'seeing places I haven't seen before' or 'visiting places I haven't been to' are better alternatives. Suggestion: use correct verbs like 'visit' or 'see' with appropriate objects.

× For example, I want to go Edinburgh, Scotland in the future because umm, I want to explore their culture.

✓ For example, I want to go to Edinburgh, Scotland in the future because I want to explore its culture.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before place names: 'go to Edinburgh.' Also use the possessive pronoun 'its' for a city rather than 'their.' Remove filler 'umm' in formal responses. Suggestion: say 'go to Edinburgh' and 'explore its culture.'