Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your response fluent, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid hesitations and incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'goes' -> 'go', 'show' -> 'I usually').

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I travel I usually photograph landscapes and cityscapes because photography helps me remember places and relax after a busy day.

제안: Answer directly with a clear preference, then give specific reasons using linking phrases (e.g., 'because', 'for example'). Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'prefer rural areas to urban areas', 'escape the hustle and bustle') and avoid filler words.

예시: I prefer views in rural areas to urban ones because villages are more peaceful and picturesque. For example, I like photographing fields and traditional houses since they offer calm and natural scenery away from the city noise.

제안: State your preference clearly and give specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'since' and avoid double negatives. Improve sentence structure: subject + verb + reason. Be concise and eliminate hesitations.

예시: I prefer views in my own country because the landscapes are diverse and familiar to me. For instance, our coastal and mountain scenery is stunning, so I don't feel the need to travel abroad to find beautiful views.

× Absolutely it's, uh, interesting when I goes everywhere I show usually take pictures of different view because it's the give me the chance to I kept from reality.

✓ Absolutely. It's interesting. When I go places, I usually take pictures of different views because they give me a chance to escape from reality.

Several third-person singular and related verb form errors: 'goes' should be 'go' because the subject is first-person singular 'I' (Type 2). 'Show' is incorrect in context and likely meant 'go' or 'travel'; corrected to 'go places'. 'Take' is fine but word order adjusted. 'View' should be plural 'views' to match 'different' (Type 1). 'It's the give' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'they give' to agree in number with 'views' and to use the correct subject. 'I kept from reality' uses wrong verb form and meaning; corrected to 'escape from reality'. Suggestion: ensure verb forms agree with subjects (I + base verb), use plural for countable nouns modified by 'different', and choose verbs that convey intended meaning (escape/ get away) rather than incorrect forms.

× I refer rural area than husband area because this uh, the village so beautiful and previous uh, I take the chain to air cap uh, from the hustle and bustle of the city.

✓ I prefer rural areas to urban areas because the villages are so beautiful, and previously I took the chance to escape from the hustle and bustle of the city.

Multiple preposition and word choice errors: 'refer' should be 'prefer' (Type 26 sentence structure/word choice but fits context of verb misuse); 'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' for general preference (Type 1). 'Than husband area' is incorrect; intended 'urban areas'—'to' is the correct preposition after 'prefer' when comparing (Type 11). 'Previous' should be 'previously' (adverb) and 'take the chain to air cap' is unintelligible; corrected to 'took the chance to escape' to convey leaving the city. Suggestion: use 'prefer A to B' structure, pluralize when speaking generally, and use correct prepositions ('to' after prefer).

× I my favorite, uh, view in the in my country because it's the a loss of umm umm, sizing and scenery. Beautiful scenery and it's not no need to another country.

✓ My favorite views are in my country because it has a lot of amazing scenery. The scenery is beautiful, so there is no need to go to another country.

Pronoun and article errors and double negatives: 'I my favorite, uh, view in the in my country' lacks a verb and has wrong word order; corrected to 'My favorite views are in my country' (Type 23 sentence without a verb and Type 27 subject-verb agreement). 'It's the a loss of umm umm, sizing and scenery' is unclear; interpreted as 'it has a lot of amazing scenery'—'a lot of' is the correct quantifier (Type 14). 'It's not no need' is a double negative; corrected to 'there is no need' (Type 3 there be issue and Type 25 double negative/comparative). Suggestion: use clear subject-verb structure, avoid double negatives, use 'a lot of' for quantity, and 'there is/are' for existence.