Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and provide a fuller response with a topic sentence and brief supporting detail. Avoid grammar mistakes like missing prepositions and gerunds. Use linking words if you add a reason. For example, say whether you dislike taking photos in general or only certain situations, and give a short explanation.

예시: I don't really enjoy taking pictures of views because I'm not good at photography. For instance, my photos often come out blurry, so I prefer to enjoy scenery with my eyes rather than my camera.

제안: Answer directly with a clear preference and give specific supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid apologizing or repeating earlier statements; instead connect your preference to skills or experiences. Fix preposition errors (use 'familiar with').

예시: I prefer rural views to urban ones because they feel more peaceful and natural. For example, I enjoy wide landscapes and open fields, and rural areas often give me a sense of calm that city skylines do not.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., 'prefer views in other countries' and 'it's memorable to see them in person'), and add a specific example or reason. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to make your answer coherent.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer different landscapes and cultural sites that I haven't seen before. For example, visiting coastal cliffs abroad would be memorable because the scenery and local architecture are very different from what I have at home.

× No, because I am not good taking pictures.

✓ No, because I am not good at taking pictures.

The verb phrase 'good at' requires the preposition 'at' before a gerund. Use 'good at taking' to correctly link ability/skill with the action. Suggestion: include 'at' when using 'good' + verb-ing.'

× I'm sorry, but I am not familiar in urban areas or rural areas.

✓ I'm sorry, but I am not familiar with urban or rural areas.

The correct preposition with 'familiar' is 'with', not 'in'. Also 'urban areas or rural areas' is repetitive; use 'urban or rural areas' for conciseness. Suggestion: use 'familiar with' and simplify parallel nouns.'

× As I've said, I don't like capturing photos.

✓ As I've said, I don't like taking photos.

Both 'capturing' and 'taking' can be used, but 'taking photos' is the more natural collocation in spoken English. The error flagged per list is gerund/verb form choice. Suggestion: use the common collocation 'take photos' or 'take pictures.'

× It's because that is not my thing.

✓ That's because it's not my thing.

The phrase 'it's because that is not my thing' is unidiomatic; 'that's because it's not my thing' or 'because it's not my thing' are correct. This fixes awkward pronoun use and improves sentence structure. Suggestion: use 'that's because' or simply 'because' followed by the clause.'

× I prefer in other countries because I heard there is a lot of beautiful views that we can see and it's a memorable if you are seeing them directly.

✓ I prefer other countries because I heard there are many beautiful views to see, and it's more memorable to see them in person.

Multiple issues: 'prefer in other countries' should be 'prefer other countries' (remove preposition). 'There is a lot of beautiful views' has number agreement and article problems; use 'there are many beautiful views' (plural). 'It's a memorable' is incorrect article/adjective use; say 'it's more memorable' or 'it's memorable.' 'If you are seeing them directly' is awkward; use 'to see them in person.' Suggestions: remove incorrect prepositions, match plural subject with plural verb, use 'many' for countable plural, and choose natural phrases like 'in person' and 'more memorable.'