Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer communicates the main idea but has grammatical errors, repetitions and awkward phrasing. Aim to give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details using correct tense and linking words. Keep answers concise (maximum 4–5 sentences) and avoid redundant phrases.

예시: Yes, I love taking photos of different views. For example, when I traveled abroad I photographed monuments, city streets and local cafés, which I later shared with friends. Seeing those pictures helps me remember the places I visited.

제안: Your response expresses preference but uses incorrect grammar, vague vocabulary and repetition. State your preference directly, give one clear reason and a specific example, and use linking words (because, for example) to connect ideas. Watch subject-verb agreement and countable/uncountable nouns.

예시: I prefer urban views because the city offers a variety of interesting scenes. For example, busy streets, religious buildings like gurdwaras and crowded markets provide opportunities to capture people and street life.

제안: The answer is understandable but contains tense errors, repetition and unclear phrasing. Give a direct answer, then one or two specific reasons with clear examples. Use correct past tense when describing past trips and link sentences with words like because and for example.

예시: I prefer photographing views in my own country because I know the locations well and enjoy documenting local culture. For example, when I visited Goa I photographed beaches, monuments and wildlife; afterwards I shared those photos with friends and felt very happy.

× Yes, I enjoy taking the pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before the plural noun 'pictures' in this general statement. Remove 'the' to make the phrase natural: 'taking pictures of different views.' Suggestion: omit articles when speaking about things in general.

× For example, when I went abroad and I saw the many kind of the things there, monuments, places, cities, cafes and other kind of the wildlife so that can be shared with my friends.

✓ For example, when I went abroad and saw many kinds of things there, such as monuments, places, cities, cafes and wildlife, I could share those with my friends.

There are multiple issues but primary are tense and article/number problems. Use simple past consistently ('went' and 'saw' — not 'and I saw'). 'Many kind of the things' should be 'many kinds of things' and 'other kind of the wildlife' should be 'wildlife' or 'other kinds of wildlife.' Also use 'I could share those with my friends' to convey ability in the past. Suggestion: keep verbs in the same tense, use correct plural forms ('kinds of'), and drop unnecessary 'the.'

× I when I see these pictures I can remember that I was went there.

✓ When I see these pictures, I can remember that I went there.

Mixed tenses and incorrect past form 'was went' (double past). Use simple past 'I went' for the past action and present simple 'When I see' or present simple 'I can remember.' Remove the extraneous 'was.' Suggestion: avoid combining auxiliary past with a past participle incorrectly.

× That's nice questions.

✓ That's a nice question.

Number and article error: 'questions' plural is inconsistent with 'That's' (that is). Use singular 'a nice question' or plural with 'Those are nice questions.' Suggestion: match subject and noun number and include the correct article.

× I mostly prefer the views in the urban area because they are the so much places that can be travelled and the views of the places like gurdwaras, some busy areas for example.

✓ I mostly prefer views in urban areas because there are so many places to visit, such as gurdwaras and busy areas.

Several issues: unnecessary 'the' before general nouns, wrong collocation 'so much places' should be 'so many places' (countable), and 'can be travelled' is incorrect — use 'to visit.' Also use plural 'urban areas' for general preference. Suggestion: use 'many' for countable nouns, correct verb collocations like 'places to visit,' and drop unnecessary articles.

× I prefer to do most of the photos of the busy area because there are the so kind of the people that can be captured on the pictures of my camera.

✓ I prefer to take most photos of busy areas because there are many kinds of people to capture in my camera photos.

Use 'take photos' not 'do photos.' Remove unnecessary 'the' before general nouns. 'So kind of the people' is incorrect: use 'many kinds of people.' Also 'captured on the pictures of my camera' should be 'captured in my photos.' Suggestion: learn common collocations: 'take photos,' 'in my photos,' 'many kinds of people.'

× That's tricky questions.

✓ That's a tricky question.

Same issue as earlier: singular/plural and article mismatch. Use singular 'a tricky question' or plural 'Those are tricky questions.' Suggestion: ensure subject 'that' matches singular noun and include article.

× I mostly prefer views in your in my own country because there are so much places to the travel there.

✓ I mostly prefer views in my own country because there are so many places to travel to.

Pronoun 'your in my' is incorrect — use 'my.' 'So much places' should be 'so many places' for countable nouns. 'To the travel there' is ungrammatical; use 'to travel to' or simply 'to visit.' Suggestion: use 'many' with countable nouns and correct preposition order 'travel to.'

× For example, I went to Goa and there are just so many simple kind of the things that can be see different kind of the wildlife.

✓ For example, I went to Goa and there are just so many simple things to see and different kinds of wildlife.

Tense mix: 'I went' is past so follow with appropriate phrasing. 'Simple kind of the things' should be 'simple things,' and 'can be see' should be 'to see' (infinitive). 'Different kind of the wildlife' should be 'different kinds of wildlife.' Suggestion: use 'to see' after 'things' and correct plural forms 'kinds of.'

× So monuments pictures that can be a take the pictures of these things.

✓ So I can take pictures of monuments and these other things.

Ungrammatical structure: 'monuments pictures that can be a take the pictures' mixes nouns and verbs wrongly. Use 'take pictures of monuments' and proper word order. Suggestion: use subject-verb-object order: 'I can take pictures of...' and avoid redundant 'pictures' repeatedly.

× And when I was come to home, I share with my friends and save the pictures.

✓ And when I came home, I shared them with my friends and saved the pictures.

Incorrect past form 'was come' should be 'came.' Maintain past tense consistently: 'shared' and 'saved.' Also 'come to home' should be 'came home.' Suggestion: use simple past for completed past actions and correct verb forms.

× I feel very happy.

✓ I feel very happy.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It correctly uses present simple to express a current feeling, so no change is needed.