Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 在回答中要注意用词准确和句子简洁，避免语法错误和用词不当（例如“feel very stunning by those beautiful scenery”不自然）。回答应直接开始并用一到两句支持细节，使用连接词使句子更连贯。可以加入具体细节（何时、在哪、用什么设备）并把句子控制在不超过5句内。

예시: Yes, I love taking photos of different views because it helps me connect with nature. For example, I often hike in nearby hills with my smartphone and spend an hour photographing sunrise landscapes. When I capture a great shot, I feel satisfied and inspired, and I usually edit it later to share with friends.

제안: 回答结构较好，但可用更具体的细节和连接词使表达更自然。例如可以说明喜欢哪类乡村景色（田野、山脉、河流），以及具体的感受或回忆，避免冗长或重复。保持句子简洁并控制在最多5句。

예시: I prefer rural views because I enjoy open fields and quiet streams. Growing up in the countryside, I often walked along a river at dusk, and those peaceful scenes helped me relax after stressful days. The fresh air and wide horizons make countryside views more restorative for me than busy cityscapes.

제안: 回答存在语法和表达不准确的问题（例如“unique spot”、“tidy St.”不清楚），句子不够连贯。应先给出明确观点，然后用一两个具体例子和连接词支持，注意名词复数、冠词和完整单词的使用，避免含糊。

예시: I prefer scenery in other countries because I enjoy different urban designs and cultural landscapes. For example, when I visited Tokyo last year, I noticed clean streets and carefully planned public spaces, which made the city views very pleasant. That contrast made me appreciate travelling to see new kinds of scenery.

× I sometimes stroll around the city, climb in the mountains, and even dive into the sea to capture the wonderful scenes.

✓ I sometimes stroll around the city, climb the mountains, and even dive into the sea to capture wonderful scenes.

句中“climb in the mountains”介词使用不当，正确用法是“climb the mountains”或“climb in the mountains”取决于含义。这里列举活动，常用“climb the mountains”。另外“the wonderful scenes”可省略冠词为“wonderful scenes”更自然。建议：动词短语和名词搭配时注意固定搭配，简洁表达。

× When I get a beautiful shot, I always feel very stunning by those beautiful scenery.

✓ When I get a beautiful shot, I always feel very thrilled by that beautiful scenery.

原句中“feel very stunning”用法错误，stunning是形容引起强烈惊艳感的事物或人，不用于描述人的感受。应使用表示情感的形容词如“thrilled”或“excited”。另外“those beautiful scenery”中“scenery”是不可数名词，不可与复数指示代词“those”连用，应改为“that beautiful scenery”。建议：注意可数/不可数名词的指示词搭配，并用恰当的情感形容词描述人的感受。

× Although my country has some unique spot, many urban areas can feel messy and crowded still.

✓ Although my country has some unique spots, many urban areas can still feel messy and crowded.

原句“unique spot”与前面的“some”不搭配，因“some”提示复数应使用“spots”。此外“crowded still”语序不自然，应该把副词“still”放在形容词前或助动词后，改为“can still feel”。建议：注意量词或限定词决定名词单复数；副词位置要放在恰当位置以符合英语语序。

× For example, when I visited Tokyo last year, I was impressed by the tidy St. and well designed architecture and that makes views.

✓ For example, when I visited Tokyo last year, I was impressed by the tidy streets and well-designed architecture, which made the views impressive.

原句“the tidy St.”使用缩写且缺少复数或完整形式，应改为“tidy streets”。“well designed”缺连字符，形容词短语作前置定语时用“well-designed”。句末“and that makes views”逻辑和时态不正确，应改为过去时与前句一致，并用关系代词“which”引导，完整表达“使景色令人印象深刻”。建议：避免不完整缩写，注意复数形式；复合形容词用连字符；保持句子时态一致、逻辑清晰。