Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural and direct but very short. Add one supporting detail with a linking word to explain why you like taking pictures (e.g., what you enjoy about it or what kinds of views you prefer). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid fillers like “yeah” too often.

예시: Yes, I do. I love taking pictures because they help me remember special places and moments, and I often focus on colorful landscapes or interesting architecture.

제안: The answer is unclear and contains errors (“abuse like” is incorrect). Start with a clear topic sentence stating a preference (or that it depends), then give a specific reason using a linking word. Use correct vocabulary (urban, rural, countryside) and avoid vague phrases.

예시: It depends on the view, but I generally prefer rural areas because I enjoy peaceful landscapes and natural light, whereas urban scenes are sometimes too busy for my style.

제안: Your idea is clear but the grammar and wording need correction. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason and an example. Use plural forms and correct articles (e.g., “other countries” and “my country, the Philippines”). Avoid fillers like “umm.”

예시: I prefer views in other countries because cities I’ve visited abroad often felt cleaner and better maintained; for example, parks in Japan were very tidy compared with some public spaces in the Philippines.

× Yeah, I prefer abuse like. It depends on the view.

✓ Yeah, I prefer both. It depends on the view.

The original sentence uses the incorrect word 'abuse' and an unclear fragment 'like'. This is a word choice and sentence structure error (fits under 'Sentence structure errors' and 'Incorrect word use' which map to ID 26). Replace 'abuse like' with 'both' if the speaker meant urban and rural, or another accurate phrase (for example, 'urban areas' or 'rural areas'). Keep the rest of the sentence 'It depends on the view.' which is grammatically fine. Suggestion: Choose the precise noun phrase needed (e.g., 'urban areas', 'rural areas', or 'both') to avoid ambiguity.

× Umm, I prefer the views in other country because it's clean. It's different in our countries in Philippines, that's why.

✓ Umm, I prefer the views in other countries because they're clean. They're different from those in the Philippines, that's why.

There are several related errors: 'other country' should be plural 'other countries' to match 'views' (singular/plural agreement — ID 1), the pronoun 'it's' refers to a plural subject 'views' and should be 'they're' (subject-pronoun agreement — ID 12/27), and the phrase 'in our countries in Philippines' is incorrect article and preposition use and word order. Use 'those in the Philippines' to compare views correctly (article/preposition error — ID 17/11). The corrected sentence uses plural forms consistently and a clear comparative phrase. Suggestion: Match singular/plural between nouns and pronouns, use 'other countries' when speaking generally about multiple foreign places, and use 'those in the Philippines' when comparing things to ones in your country.