Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答非常直接，先比较过去和现在的偏好，再给出两个具体原因，逻辑清晰。可以删掉“Actually”或将句子表达得更自然，例如用“as I’ve got older”代替“now that I’m older”。此外，可以加入一个简短的具体场景，使答案更有个性，但要避免超过4—5句话。注意“more convenient and faster”语法正确，但可以用“more convenient and efficient”避免重复表达速度。

예시: I prefer typing, especially now that I’m older. It’s more convenient and efficient because I can edit my work easily and share it with classmates or colleagues. For example, I usually type my assignments so I can reorganize my ideas without having to rewrite the whole page.

제안: 答案回应了问题，也提供了频率、时长和原因，但有几处需要纠正。首先，“ALT test”可能是“IELTS test”的口误；其次，“because I'm preparing... and practice”应改为“because I’m preparing... and practising”；“a better grades”应改为“better grades”或“a better grade”。可以使用“about an hour”后补充练习目的，例如提高打字速度或写作流畅度，使内容更具体。

예시: Yes, I type on my laptop every day because I’m preparing for the IELTS test. I usually spend about an hour typing essays and reviewing my answers. This helps me write more quickly and organise my ideas more efficiently during the exam.

제안: 答案包含时间、地点、学习方式和结果，内容较完整，但句子过长，连接词使用过多，影响自然度。建议拆分为2—3句话，并把“Maybe when I was six years old”改为更自然的“Probably when I was six”。“type on the keyboard”可简化为“type”；“got a great hit in that subject”不是自然搭配，应改为“got a high mark in that subject”或“did very well in that class”。

예시: I probably learned to type when I was six, shortly after I started primary school. We had computer classes, and our teacher taught us the basics of using a keyboard. I practised regularly and eventually got a high mark in the class, which made me feel proud.

제안: 回答简洁、直接，并且清楚说明了练习方式和效果。不过，“I think I just improved”时态不够准确，因为你是在描述持续到现在的提高过程，建议改为“I improve”或“I’ve improved”。另外，在手机上打字与键盘打字并不完全相同，可以说明它主要帮助你提高速度和减少拼写错误，再补充键盘练习会让答案更贴合问题。

예시: I improve my typing mainly by practising every day. I often text my friends and family on my phone, which helps me type faster and make fewer spelling mistakes. I also practise on my laptop by typing short essays, so I can become more accurate on a real keyboard.

× Actually yes, I type on my laptop every day because I'm preparing my ALT test and practice writing for this exam.

✓ Actually, yes, I type on my laptop every day because I'm preparing for my ALT test and practicing writing for this exam.

在“because”引导的原因从句中，前面使用了“I'm preparing”，后面的并列动词也应该保持相同的形式，因此应使用“practicing”，而不是“practice”。另外，“prepare for”表示“为……做准备”，所以应说“preparing for my ALT test”。建议在并列结构中保持动词形式一致，例如“I'm studying and practicing”。

× I usually spend about an hour a day typing essays so that I can get a better grades.

✓ I usually spend about an hour a day typing essays so that I can get better grades.

“grades”是复数名词，前面不能使用不定冠词“a”。应去掉“a”，说“get better grades”。如果使用单数，应改为“get a better grade”。建议注意冠词和名词单复数的搭配： “a better grade”或“better grades”。

× I think I just improved my typing by practicing on my phone every day, chatting with friends and family.

✓ I think I improve my typing by practicing on my phone every day, chatting with friends and family.

问题“ How do you improve your typing?”询问的是通常的方法或习惯，因此回答应使用一般现在时“improve”，而不是表示过去完成动作的“improved”。“every day”也表明这是一个经常性的行为。建议描述习惯、方法或规律时使用一般现在时，例如“I improve my English by reading every day.”