Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific reasons, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and vary vocabulary (e.g., “spelling” or “punctuation” instead of repeating “grammar issues”).

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting. Firstly, typing helps me catch spelling and punctuation mistakes because word processors underline errors automatically. Secondly, my handwriting is often messy, which makes typed notes easier to read and revise.

제안: Give a direct answer (desktop or laptop) then add one brief specific detail. Avoid uncertainty phrases like “I don't know the exact distinction” and correct small grammar errors (article use, plural forms).

예시: I use a laptop keyboard every day. I rely on my laptop for study and IELTS practice because it is portable and I can type anywhere, unlike a desktop which stays in one place.

제안: Start with a clear time reference (e.g., age) and then give concise supporting details. Avoid hyperbole (“since the day I was born”) and incomplete sentences. Use linking words (for example, “because” and “so”) logically and finish your thought.

예시: I learned to type when I was about three or four years old. My parents both work with computers and we had several PCs at home, so I started using a keyboard for games and simple tasks with my older brother, which helped me pick up typing early.

제안: Provide a clear method: state one or two specific strategies you use to improve typing and link them to results. Avoid conditional and unclear phrasing; be precise about actions (practising, using online tools, taking typing tests).

예시: I improve my typing by practising daily with online typing exercises and by writing IELTS practice essays on my laptop. I also use spell-check and review my errors afterwards, which helps me type faster and make fewer punctuation and grammar mistakes.

× I'd say that I definitely prefer typing because sometimes I have difficulties with grammar and punctuation and whenever you type on your computers it can automatically fix up your mistakes unlike handwriting where I have many issues with my overall handwriting and grammar issues.

✓ I'd say that I definitely prefer typing because sometimes I have difficulties with grammar and punctuation, and when I type on my computer it can automatically fix my mistakes, unlike handwriting, where I have many problems with my handwriting and grammar.

The original mixes second-person 'you' with first-person 'I' (incorrect pronoun reference). Use a consistent first-person perspective ('I' and 'my computer'). Also tighten repetition: 'fix up your mistakes' -> 'fix my mistakes'; 'issues' used twice changed to 'problems'. Use commas to separate clauses for clarity.

× To be honest, I don't know the exact distinction between desktop or laptop keyboards since I usually use my laptop and never heard of a desktop keyboards I always use my laptop for everything, for every purpose such as ILS writing practices and more.

✓ To be honest, I don't know the exact distinction between desktop and laptop keyboards since I usually use my laptop and have never used a desktop keyboard. I always use my laptop for everything, including IELTS writing practice and more.

Problems: inconsistent pronouns and verb forms and pluralization. Use 'desktop and laptop keyboards' (parallelism) and 'have never used a desktop keyboard' (correct verb tense and singular noun). Also change 'ILS' to 'IELTS' (likely intended) and 'practices' to 'practice' (uncountable). Split into two sentences for clarity.

× I think since the day that I was born because my family, both my mother and father work in an office so they use a lot of computers and we have many computers and laptops in our house and I got one at the age of I think three or four. I played games with my brother there and also because the games were social we used to interact with

✓ I think since I was very young because both my mother and father work in offices, so they use a lot of computers. We had many computers and laptops in our house, and I got one when I was three or four. I played games with my brother, and because the games were social we used to interact with others.

Multiple tense and sentence-structure issues: 'since the day that I was born' is awkward for ability—use 'since I was very young'. 'Work in an office' -> 'work in offices' for generality. Use past tense consistently ('we had', 'I got', 'I played', 'we used to interact'). Complete the final clause by adding 'others'. Break into sentences for clarity.

× I guess it's fine, if not if I wouldn't look at my grammatical and punctuational errors, overall it would be great because I'm improving my writing every day on my computer based on the IELTS exam.

✓ I guess it's fine. If I didn't check my grammatical and punctuation errors, overall it would still be fine because I'm improving my writing every day on my computer for the IELTS exam.

Original contains confusing conditional structure ('if not if I wouldn't') which is ungrammatical. Use a clear conditional: 'If I didn't check...' Also 'punctuational' is incorrect; use 'punctuation'. 'Based on the IELTS exam' is awkward -> 'for the IELTS exam'. Split into two sentences for clarity.