Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Improve grammatical accuracy (e.g., verb forms, articles) and remove filler words like "like" and "you know."

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit my work quickly and share documents with classmates, which saves time when working on group projects.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and one specific supporting detail. Use linking words to connect reasons and correct small grammar errors (article use and word order). Remove redundant phrases like "I mean" and "I think" when already stated.

예시: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and convenient. For instance, I can take my laptop to the library or to class, which helps me study and complete assignments on the go.

제안: Answer directly with a clear time reference and one concise reason or brief detail. Avoid awkward phrasing and redundancies; use correct tense and simpler structure. Omit vague phrases like "you know" and unclear segments such as "what with the revolution."

예시: I learned to type when I was in primary school, about ten years ago. At that time, computers were becoming common at school, so we had lessons to learn basic typing skills.

제안: Provide a direct strategy with 1–2 specific methods and an example of practice. Avoid repeating words and phrases. Use correct plural/singular forms and concise linking words like "for example" or "by."

예시: I improve my typing by practicing every day on my laptop, for example by completing online typing exercises and typing essays. This helps increase my speed and reduce errors over time.

× Well, I think that right now we're living in the fast paced world so everything would just run really fast.

✓ Well, I think that right now we're living in a fast-paced world, so everything moves very quickly.

The sentence has informal and awkward phrasing ('the fast paced world', 'everything would just run really fast') and tense/modal misuse ('would' is unnecessary). Use the adjective 'fast-paced' with a hyphen and the present simple 'moves' to describe a general truth. This makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× So I definitely like typing rather than handwriting because like first of all to really practice my typing what it takes with my friends and even I need to practice typing to type everything instantly.

✓ So I definitely prefer typing to handwriting; first of all, I practiced typing with my friends, and I also need to practice to type quickly.

Original sentence misuses 'like' as a filler, has awkward structure ('to really practice my typing what it takes'), and mixes tenses. Use 'prefer A to B' for comparisons, remove filler words, and rephrase into clear clauses: past 'practiced' for learning with friends and present infinitive 'to type quickly' for ongoing need.

× Well, I think that I just like type on the laptop, keyboard every day because I mean that it's really convenient and it's really handy as well because I can bring to a lot of places along with me.

✓ Well, I think I just like typing on a laptop keyboard every day because it's really convenient and handy; I can take it to many places with me.

Use gerund 'typing' after 'like' instead of base verb 'type'. Remove unnecessary commas and 'I mean that'. Use 'take it to many places with me' rather than 'bring to a lot of places along with me' for natural preposition use.

× So I think that I prefer typing on the laptop keyboard.

✓ So I think I prefer typing on a laptop keyboard.

Using 'the' implies a specific laptop known to listener; the general statement needs the indefinite article 'a'. Also omit unnecessary 'that' for conciseness.

× I think that the first time I learned how to type was back a few years ago when it was in primary school and at that time you know what with the revolution with the technology revolutionized, I need to learn how to type and takes with my friends.

✓ I think the first time I learned to type was a few years ago in primary school, and at that time, with the technological revolution, I needed to learn to type and practiced with my friends.

Mixed and incorrect tenses: 'was back a few years ago' is redundant; use 'a few years ago'. Change 'learned how to type' to 'learned to type' (both acceptable). 'I need' should be past 'I needed' to match 'learned'. 'takes with my friends' is unclear; use 'practiced with my friends'. Also simplify phrasing about technology.

× I think that the best way to really improve my typing is definitely using my keyboard or using my laptop every day to really type and practice writing on also on the computer as well to really type every essays and every exercises.

✓ I think the best way to improve my typing is definitely to use my keyboard or laptop every day to type and practice writing on the computer, doing essays and exercises regularly.

Use infinitive 'to use' after 'way' (the best way to do something). Avoid redundant 'really' and 'also' and incorrect phrase 'type every essays'. Use plural 'essays and exercises' and present participle 'doing' to show ongoing practice. Reorder for clarity.