Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy ("prefer typing more" → "prefer typing"), and add one specific reason with a linking word. Keep it under 5 sentences.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more legible. For example, when I take notes on my laptop I can organize them easily and search them later.

제안: Correct small grammatical errors and avoid filler. Begin with a direct topic sentence, use a linking word to explain why, and provide a specific detail about what makes it comfortable. Keep it concise.

예시: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it's portable and comfortable. For instance, I like the compact layout and the adjustable screen height which reduces strain.

제안: Make the time reference clear and grammatical. Use a straightforward topic sentence followed by a supporting detail about how you learned (method or context). Avoid tentative words like "probably" unless necessary.

예시: I learned to type when I was in elementary school, around age nine. My school taught basic typing classes and we practiced with typing games to build speed.

제안: Answer the question in present tense and directly describe current improvement methods. Use linking words (e.g., "however", "since then") and give specific strategies you used or still use (practice, online tutors, typing software). Keep it under 5 sentences and grammatical.

예시: I improved my typing by practicing regularly with online typing programs and using my laptop for all coursework. Since starting college, I also set aside 10–15 minutes daily for drills, which increased my speed and accuracy.

× I usually prefer typing more than handwriting.

✓ I usually prefer typing to handwriting.

Prefer is followed by 'to' when comparing two activities (prefer A to B). 'Prefer ... more than' is nonstandard; use 'prefer A to B' or 'like A more than B'.

× Definitely, I usually type on laptop keyboard every day because it is COM comfortable for me.

✓ Definitely, I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is comfortable for me.

Countable nouns like 'laptop keyboard' require an article: 'a laptop keyboard'. Also remove 'COM' (typo). 'Comfortable' is the correct adjective.

× Probably it is when I was in elementary school student.

✓ I probably learned when I was an elementary school student.

The original has awkward structure and missing article. Use subject + verb ('I learned') and include the article 'an' before 'elementary school student'. 'Probably' should modify the verb.

× When I was young I'm not good at typing, but after I going college I become naturally good at typing.

✓ When I was young I was not good at typing, but after I went to college I naturally became good at typing.

Tense consistency errors: use past tense throughout for past events. 'I'm not good' should be 'I was not good'. 'After I going college' is ungrammatical; use 'after I went to college' or 'after going to college'. 'I become' should be past 'I became'. Also word order: 'naturally became' is correct.