Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and correct slight grammar issues (e.g., 'which' → 'that', 'electronic gadgets' → 'electronic devices').

예시: I prefer handwriting to typing because writing notes by hand helps me understand and remember lectures better. For example, when I take handwritten notes in class I find it easier to organize ideas and recall them later.

제안: Begin with a direct answer and then give a clear, concise reason. Correct exam name and grammar (e.g., 'ILS' → 'IELTS', use plural/singular appropriately). Use a linking word like 'because' or 'since' and avoid run-on sentences.

예시: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I am preparing for the IELTS exam and need to practice the two writing tasks. As a result, I type sample essays and reports on my laptop to improve my speed and structure.

제안: Provide a single clear time reference, then give specific details using linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., '4th grade' → 'fourth grade', 'QWERTY piece' → 'the QWERTY layout', 'my both hands' → 'both hands'). Keep it concise.

예시: I learned to type in fourth grade when I was studying in Dubai. My teacher showed us the QWERTY layout and taught us how to use both hands, and I practised by typing essays and copying textbook passages.

제안: Answer directly and give specific, practical strategies with clearer language and correct verb forms ('transcript' → 'transcribe'). Use linking words like 'for example' and mention measurable habits (time, frequency).

예시: I improve my typing by practising daily for at least 20 minutes. For example, I copy short articles or textbook paragraphs and sometimes transcribe lectures to build speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting because the topic which I learn in the class or from a lecture, I can understand what the teacher is trying to say and I can also remember what it is that I'm writing.

✓ I prefer handwriting because when I learn a topic in class or from a lecture, I can understand what the teacher is saying and I can also remember what I write.

The original sentence misuses the relative clause 'which I learn' and has faulty clause order. Use a temporal conjunction 'when' and correct verb forms: 'learn a topic in class' and 'what the teacher is saying' (present continuous to describe ongoing speech). Also replace 'what it is that I'm writing' with the simpler 'what I write' for clarity and correctness.

× So I prefer handwriting rather than typing in electronic gadgets.

✓ So I prefer handwriting rather than typing on electronic devices.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'typing on a device' and 'devices' is the correct plural noun. 'Electronic gadgets' is informal; 'electronic devices' is more natural. 'Rather than' is correct but requires parallel construction.

× I type on the laptop keyboard every day because as I'm preparing for ILS exam, I mainly focus on practicing writing tasks which are two tasks 1 is a report and an essay.

✓ I type on the laptop keyboard every day because, as I'm preparing for the ILS exam, I mainly focus on practicing two writing tasks: Task 1 is a report and Task 2 is an essay.

Missing definite article before 'ILS exam' and awkward phrasing. Also clarify structure by naming the two tasks and using plural agreement 'two writing tasks'. Use colon to list tasks and correct numbering. No third-person singular verb issue actually, but the sentence had article and structure errors categorized here as third person singular because of limited list—main issues addressed.

× I learned when I was at my 4th grade, I was in Dubai so my teacher has taught me the QWERTY piece which are on the keyboard and how I should use my both hands while typing.

✓ I learned when I was in fourth grade. I was in Dubai, and my teacher taught me the QWERTY layout on the keyboard and how to use both hands while typing.

Use simple past 'taught' rather than present perfect 'has taught' because the action occurred in the past. Use 'in fourth grade' (not 'at my 4th grade'). 'QWERTY layout' is the correct term; 'piece' is incorrect. 'Which are on the keyboard' is unnecessary and incorrect agreement. Use 'how to use both hands' not 'how I should use my both hands'.

× I used to write some essays and copy some texts from the textbook.

✓ I used to write essays and copy texts from the textbook.

The original is understandable but wordy; remove 'some' for naturalness. 'Used to' correctly indicates habitual past; verbs and tense are fine.

× I think every day you have to spend some time tapping on the keyboard, such as you can copy some text from the various sources or simple paragraphs which are in the textbook or you can transcript them.

✓ I think you should spend time every day practicing on the keyboard; for example, you can copy text from various sources or simple paragraphs in a textbook, or transcribe them.

'Have to' is strong obligation; 'should' is milder advice. Word order improved to 'spend time every day'. 'Various sources' not 'the various sources'. 'Transcript' is a noun or wrong verb form; correct verb is 'transcribe'. Use parallel structure for options.