Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: まず、回答は簡潔にし、主題文をはっきり述べることが重要です。スピーチ中の「uh」などのフィラーを減らし、理由を具体的に述べましょう。例えば“handwriting lets me think better and remember things more easily”のように効果や理由を一つか二つ示し、冗長な表現（“it can be written by myself”など）を避けてください。文は最大5文に収め、論理的な接続詞（because, so, therefore）を使ってください。

예시: I prefer handwriting because it helps me think more clearly and remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I retain key points for longer. Therefore, I usually choose handwriting for studying and planning.

제안: 回答は直接的に“desktop or laptop”に答え、理由を明確に述べる必要があります。文法と語順の誤り（“needs to be used laptop”など）を修正し、具体例を一つ加えてください。また不要な繰り返しを避け、接続語（because, so）で文をつなげてください。

예시: I type on a laptop every day because my school requires students to submit assignments online. For instance, I use my laptop to write essays and complete coursework, so I use it for most of my school tasks.

제안: 質問は「いつ学んだか」を尋ねているので、具体的な時期（年齢や学年）を最初に述べ、その後で理由や背景を簡潔に説明してください。繰り返しや曖昧な表現（“my father's job is sorry”など）を避け、過去形の文を正しく使いましょう。接続詞（because, so）で流れを整えてください。

예시: I learned to type when I was around 10 years old because my father, whose job required frequent typing, showed me basic techniques. I practiced with him for a few months and gradually improved my speed.

제안: 良い内容ですが、文を完全に終えること、冠詞や複数形の誤り（“online typing lesson”→“online typing lessons”など）を直すことが必要です。練習方法をより具体的に（どのサイト、どの練習方法、成果の測定方法）述べ、接続詞で理由と結果を明確にしてください。

예시: I improve my typing by practicing on the computer every day because most of my schoolwork is typed. For example, I use online typing lessons for about 20 minutes daily and track my speed with a typing test each week to measure progress.

× I prefer handwriting because, uh, it can be written by myself, so I can write directly and it is not important to type skills.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I can write by myself directly, so typing skills are not important to me.

The phrase 'can be written by myself' incorrectly uses passive voice with a reflexive idea; use active voice 'I can write by myself'. 'Write directly' is clearer than 'write directly and'. 'It is not important to type skills' has incorrect noun phrase and article use; use 'typing skills are not important to me'. Suggestion: use active constructions and correct noun forms (typing skills).

× I always type by laptop because my school needs to be used laptop and I always use laptop by writing statement or.

✓ I always type on a laptop because my school requires students to use laptops, and I always use a laptop for writing assignments.

Use 'on a laptop' not 'by laptop'. 'My school needs to be used laptop' is ungrammatical; use 'requires students to use laptops'. 'Use laptop by writing statement' should be 'use a laptop for writing assignments'. Suggestion: choose correct prepositions ('on','for') and proper noun forms ('a laptop','assignments').

× I learned for my father because my father's job is sorry, my father's job required typing skills, so my father is good at typing skills, so I watch.

✓ I learned from my father because his job required typing skills, so he is good at typing, and I watched him.

Use 'learned from my father' (preposition). 'My father's job is sorry' is irrelevant; remove 'sorry'. Use past tense 'required'. Use 'is good at typing' (no plural). Use 'watched him' to show observing. Suggestion: simplify and use correct prepositions and tense consistency.

× To improve my type skills, I always practice on computer because most of my school work is typed rather than handwritten. For example, I use online typing lesson every day for about 20 minutes to increase my speed and.

✓ To improve my typing skills, I always practice on the computer because most of my schoolwork is typed rather than handwritten. For example, I use online typing lessons every day for about 20 minutes to increase my speed.

Use 'typing skills' not 'type skills'. Say 'on the computer' or 'on computers' with article. 'Schoolwork' is one word. 'Online typing lessons' plural and drop trailing 'and'. Suggestion: correct noun forms, articles, and plurals, and finish sentences completely.