Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid fragments and repetition (e.g., "as I feel like I am able to. Correlate my thoughts...").

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because I can type much faster and organize my ideas more clearly. For example, when I write essays on my laptop I can easily edit and rearrange paragraphs, which helps me express my thoughts more logically.

제안: Make the answer more natural and avoid repetition. Use a concise topic sentence, then give a brief supporting detail with a linking word. Remove redundant phrases like "write various assignments on laptop" and "to my respective teachers."

예시: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because my college coursework requires frequent essays and reports. As a result, I’m comfortable using a laptop keyboard for most of my academic work.

제안: Be clearer and more direct with dates and avoid vague phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas and give one specific detail about how you learned. Remove awkward phrases like "to be appropriate" and "necessary to opt for."

예시: I learned to type in first or second grade at my international school because keyboard skills were part of the computer science curriculum. We practiced typing using simple lessons and exercises during weekly computer classes.

제안: Give a more structured answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two concrete methods. Avoid repeating "also" and use linking words like "which" or "so" to show cause and effect.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing regularly, for example by writing essays and taking online typing exercises. This not only improves my speed and accuracy but also helps enhance my English writing skills.

× I prefer typing on a computer or a laptop rather than handwriting as I feel like I am able to. Correlate my thoughts better when I'm typing on a computer as I'm able to do it much faster than writing it by hand. Also, it's much clearer in understanding as compared to writing by hand.

✓ I prefer typing on a computer or laptop rather than handwriting because I can better organize my thoughts when I type, I can do it much faster than writing by hand, and typed text is usually clearer to read.

The original contains sentence fragments and awkward clause breaks (sentence structure errors). 'I feel like I am able.' and 'Correlate my thoughts better...' are incomplete or incorrectly separated. Combine related ideas into a single coherent sentence and use appropriate conjunctions ('because', 'and') and verbs ('organize') to make the meaning clear and grammatical. Keep tense and meaning consistent: present simple for general preference and ability.

× Yes, I usually do type on a laptop keyboard on everyday basis as I'm a college student and my assignments require me to write various assignments on laptop and submit them to my respective teachers.

✓ Yes, I usually type on a laptop keyboard on an everyday basis because I'm a college student and my assignments require me to write various tasks on a laptop and submit them to my teachers.

Errors include article use and redundancy. Use 'on an everyday basis' (article 'an') and 'a laptop' before singular noun. 'Do type' is unnecessary; simple present 'type' is correct. 'Various assignments' and 'assignments' are redundant; change one to 'tasks' or remove redundancy. 'Respective' is unnecessary here; use 'my teachers.' These corrections fix article errors and improve clarity.

× I went to an International School and I learned typing on a keyboard in my early years of schooling, which was around the first or second grade to be appropriate as it was a part of our curriculum.

✓ I went to an international school and learned to type on a keyboard in my early years of schooling, around first or second grade, because it was part of our curriculum.

Use simple past 'learned' correctly; replace 'learned typing' with 'learned to type' for idiomatic usage (verb + to-infinitive). Remove unnecessary words ('to be appropriate') and capitalize 'international school' only as proper noun if it is a specific school's name; otherwise use lowercase. Reorder clauses for clarity and use 'because' to show reason. This addresses past tense phrasing and verb form choices.

× We had subjects like computer science as additional coursework and it was necessary to opt for.

✓ We had subjects like computer science as additional coursework, and it was necessary to opt for them.

The original ends with a preposition and lacks an object; add 'them' to complete the verb 'opt for' which requires an object. Also add a comma before 'and' to join clauses. This fixes the verb + -ing/form issue by providing the correct object for the phrasal verb.

× I improve my typing by writing essays on my laptop for practice, which also increase my English skills and also my typing skills side by side.

✓ I improve my typing by writing essays on my laptop for practice, which also increases my English skills and my typing skills.

Subject 'which' refers to the practice (singular), so the verb should be 'increases' (present singular). Remove redundant 'also' and 'side by side' to make the sentence concise. This corrects present tense subject-verb agreement and adverb redundancy.