Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答题需要更直接的主题句并避免重复表达。可把原因说得更具体，使用连接词使句子流畅，并控制在最多五句内。注意语法和词汇搭配，如用 'even though' 或 'although' 后主句保持简洁。

예시: I prefer handwriting because I enjoy the tactile feel of paper and it helps me concentrate. Although typing is faster and more convenient, handwriting makes my ideas clearer and more memorable.

제안: 回答要更自然流畅，避免重复词汇（如 'laptop' 两次）。可以先给简洁答案，然后用一两个具体原因支持，并用连接词连贯观点。注意时态和词形（e.g., 'the laptop is more convenient'）。

예시: I usually type on a laptop because it's more portable than a desktop. For example, I can work in different rooms or take it to school, which makes studying and travelling easier.

제안: 回答时间点不明确且有语法错误与自相矛盾（先说6岁又说5岁）。应先给一个明确年龄，然后用一两句具体背景说明。注意时态和词形（e.g., 'got to know', 'used' 应改为 'use' 或 'started using'）。

예시: I started learning to type when I was about six because I began using the Internet and electronic devices at school. As a result, I practised typing with online games and simple lessons, which improved my skills quickly.

제안: 回答含有填充词和犹豫语，应去掉口头语，改用具体方法说明如何练习（例如盲打、使用练习软件、定时练习）。使用连接词使叙述更连贯，控制在最多五句。

예시: I improve my typing by practising touch typing regularly and using online typing programs to increase my speed. For instance, I do 15-minute timed exercises every day and try to type without looking at the keyboard to build accuracy.

× I type on the laptop keyboard because laptop is more convenient and now I have abandoned the desktop.

✓ I type on the laptop keyboard because the laptop is more convenient and now I have abandoned the desktop.

句子中对特定事物“laptop（笔记本）”使用时应加定冠词“the”。此处说的是相对于“the desktop（台式机）”的那台笔记本，应使用“the laptop”。建议：在表明特定、已知或之前提到的名词前使用“the”。

× At the age of 6 I guess because I get to know the Internet and to used some electronic devices at early age, so I think it may be at the age of 5.

✓ I guess it was at the age of 6 because I got to know the Internet and used some electronic devices at an early age; so I think it may have been at the age of 5.

原句时态混乱且动词形式错误：描述过去经历应使用过去时（got, used），而“to used”是不正确的形式。还要注意冠词和表达一致性，用“an early age”。建议：回忆过去时使用过去式，并保持一致性；若表达推测过去可用“may have been”。

× I think practice makes perfect, you know, uh, so I just keep practicing sometimes, uh, even not seeing the keyboard so that I will be more, umm, proficient.

✓ I think practice makes perfect, so I just keep practicing sometimes, even without looking at the keyboard so that I will become more proficient.

短语“even not seeing the keyboard”不符合英语习惯，正确的表达是“without looking at the keyboard”或“not looking at the keyboard”。此外“keep practicing”之后直接用动名词是可以的，但更自然的搭配是“keep practicing”或“practice without looking”。建议：用“without + 动名词/动词-ing”表达“在不……的情况下”，并用“become more proficient”更自然。