Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural, relevant and well-balanced, but you can improve by tightening the structure and adding a brief linking phrase to connect the two preferences. Avoid redundancy (e.g., “writing by hand” and “handwriting” close together) and keep to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

예시: I prefer handwriting for journaling because it helps me remember my feelings and slows me down to reflect. However, when I need to brainstorm quickly, I choose typing because it’s faster and more efficient for capturing many ideas.

제안: Your meaning is clear but the answer has grammar errors, hesitations and unclear phrases. Improve by starting with a clear topic sentence, remove filler words (umm) and correct verb forms. Use one concise supporting reason or frequency phrase.

예시: I usually type on a laptop, so I do most of my typing on that device. I rarely use a desktop because I don’t have one at home and I find laptops more convenient.

제안: Good direct answer with a clear supporting detail. To improve further, add a brief linking word to show cause and make it slightly more specific (e.g., mention age or year) while keeping it concise.

예시: I learned to type when I started middle school, around age 11. The first computer assignment was to write a short story, so I practiced typing a lot to finish it on time.

제안: Your answer communicates some methods but contains repetitions, unclear phrases and wrong word choices (e.g., “attached typing”, “word permanent”). Clarify the specific activities you do, remove repetition, and use accurate vocabulary (speed, accuracy, drills). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I don’t use any special technique, but I practice regularly and take online typing tests to track my speed and accuracy. I also do focused drills for common key combinations to reduce mistakes and increase my words per minute.

× I usually using use laptop, so I think I type more often on my laptop and for the desktop I think it's very rare because umm computer is very and not too much not.

✓ I usually use a laptop, so I think I type more often on my laptop; using a desktop is very rare because the computer is not very convenient.

Errors: incorrect verb form ('using' with 'usually' should be 'use') and redundant words causing sentence structure problems. Also missing article before 'laptop' and unclear clause about desktop. Suggestion: use simple present 'use' with adverb 'usually', include the indefinite article 'a laptop', and rephrase the desktop clause to be clear and grammatical. Ensure no duplicated words and remove filler sounds like 'umm'.

× I usually using use laptop, so I think I type more often on my laptop and for the desktop I think it's very rare because umm computer is very and not too much not.

✓ I usually use a laptop, so I think I type more often on my laptop; using a desktop is very rare because the computer is not very convenient.

Error: missing article 'a' before 'laptop' and missing definite article 'the' before 'computer'. Suggestion: include articles where required ('a laptop', 'the computer') to make the nouns grammatical and specific.

× I don't use any special special technique, but I learned about typing speed at college and practice regularly to improve.

✓ I don't use any special technique, but I learned about typing speed at college and practice regularly to improve.

Error: duplicated word 'special special' creates redundancy. Suggestion: remove the duplicate to make the sentence concise and grammatical.

× I don't use any special special technique, but I learned about typing speed at college and practice regularly to improve.

✓ I don't use any special technique, but I learned about typing speed at college and practice regularly to improve.

Potential tense mismatch: 'learned' (past) and 'practice' (present) are acceptable because learning happened in the past and practice is habitual present. Keep tenses as is. No change needed beyond removing duplication.

× I use online typing tests and focus on attached typing and accuracy which help raise my word permanent.

✓ I use online typing tests and focus on touch typing and accuracy, which help increase my words-per-minute.

Errors: 'attached typing' is incorrect collocation; correct term is 'touch typing'. 'Word permanent' is incorrect — intended 'words per minute' (WPM). Suggestion: use established terminology 'touch typing' and the correct expression 'words per minute' and add a hyphen for clarity.