Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答をより自然で流暢にするために、理由を明確に述べ、具体的な例や効果（例えば記憶に残りやすい理由）を付け加えてください。また、冗長な語や不自然な構造を避け、文をつなぐ接続詞を使って論理的に示しましょう。最大5文以内に収めること。

예시: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better. When I write notes by hand, I usually summarize ideas in my own words, which makes them easier to recall later. For example, during lectures I find that handwritten notes stick in my memory longer than typed ones.

제안: 文法と語順の誤りが多いので、まず主語・動詞・目的語の正しい順序で短く明確に答えましょう。具体的にどの機器を使うかを一文で述べ、必要なら頻度や理由を付け加えると良いです。繰り返しや未完の文を避け、接続語で文をつなげてください。

예시: I type every day on my iPad, which has a detachable keyboard. I use it for emails and schoolwork because it's portable and convenient. Usually I spend about two hours a day typing on it.

제안: 時制と時期をはっきりさせ、繰り返しやため息のような言葉（uh）を省いてください。学んだ時期を一文で述べ、補足としてどの学年で何を学んだか具体的に説明すると良いです。最大5文で簡潔にまとめましょう。

예시: I learned to type in elementary school when I joined a keyboard class. Later, I practiced more in junior high school during computer lessons, which improved my speed and accuracy.

제안: 方法を具体的に述べ、練習の頻度や使っている練習法やツール（タイピングソフトや練習メニュー）を示してください。曖昧な表現や断片的な文を避け、論理的に理由と結果をつなげて話しましょう。

예시: I improve my typing by practicing every day using online typing programs. I do short drills for accuracy in the morning and timed tests in the evening, which helps increase my speed and reduce errors.

× I prefer handwriting. It is because it is easy for me and I remember a sentence.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it is easy for me and I remember sentences.

The phrase 'remember a sentence' is unnatural here; the plural 'sentences' is more appropriate when speaking generally. Also 'It is because' is unnecessary; combine into one sentence: 'I prefer handwriting because...'. This improves fluency and article usage by removing an incorrect singular article reference. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general statements and avoid redundant introductory 'It is because'. Make the sentence concise.

× I usually use keyboard type everyday.

✓ I usually type on a keyboard every day.

The original mixes noun and verb forms and lacks correct quantifier spacing. 'Everyday' as an adjective should be 'every day' as an adverb phrase. Use the verb 'type' and the phrase 'on a keyboard' to convey the action clearly. Suggestion: Use 'type on a keyboard' and 'every day' as two words when describing frequency.

× I have a iPad and iPad have keyboard so I usually use iPad every day.

✓ I have an iPad and the iPad has a keyboard, so I usually use it every day.

Articles before 'iPad' are missing and capitalization is inconsistent. Use 'an' before a vowel sound ('an iPad'), and when referring back to the same device use the definite article 'the' and pronoun 'it'. Also use 'has' for third person singular. This fixes article and agreement errors. Suggestion: Use appropriate articles ('an' before vowel sounds) and pronouns to avoid repetition.

× So I often.

✓ So I often use it.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a main verb and object. Complete the thought by adding the verb 'use' and the object 'it' referring to the iPad. Suggestion: Ensure each sentence has a subject and a verb; avoid sentence fragments.

× In junior high school student also UH elementary school I I joined the keyboard class in UH in elementary school.

✓ When I was in junior high and elementary school, I joined a keyboard class in elementary school.

Original has word order problems, repetition, and incorrect noun phrase 'junior high school student'. Use a clause 'When I was in junior high and elementary school' to set time, and 'a keyboard class' with correct article. Remove repeated 'I'. Suggestion: Use time clauses ('When I was in...') and correct articles; avoid repetition.

× I improve my typing to practice everyday.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing every day.

Use the gerund 'practicing' after the preposition 'by' to express method. 'Everyday' should be 'every day' here. The original incorrectly uses infinitive 'to practice' for method. Suggestion: Use 'by' + gerund to describe how you improve a skill and write 'every day' as two words.

× Also uh. Some people are typing towards is important.

✓ Also, practicing typing is important.

Original sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. 'Some people are typing towards' is unclear. The intended meaning is better expressed as a noun phrase: 'practicing typing is important.' This fixes structure and clarifies meaning. Suggestion: Express general statements with clear noun phrases or complete clauses; remove filler sounds like 'uh' in writing.