Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and directly relevant. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then add one or two specific, coherent reasons using linking words. Avoid contradictory or unclear phrasing (e.g. "not easily accessible to type anywhere" is confusing).

예시: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me form letters more neatly and improves my memory. Moreover, handwriting is useful when I don't have a device handy, so I practice it regularly to keep my writing clear.

제안: Correct grammar and make the response more natural. Begin with a topic sentence (yes/no and which), then give two concise reasons using linking words (for example, because/so). Remove repetition.

예시: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because my office provides one. It’s convenient and portable, so I can easily take it to meetings or work from different locations.

제안: Provide a clear time reference and a short, organized explanation. Fix grammar and avoid fillers. Use a linking word to connect the time and reason (e.g. "after" or "because").

예시: I learned to type after finishing primary school because my school didn’t have computer classes. Therefore I joined a local computer institute to learn typing and basic computer skills.

제안: Be specific about methods and outcomes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concrete strategies and a result, using linking words (for example, by/so/therefore). Avoid repetition.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing daily with online typing exercises and by doing many tasks at work. As a result, my speed and accuracy have become smoother and I make fewer mistakes.

× I prefer handwriting over typing because handwriting practice helps to write smoothly and better quality of handwriting.

✓ I prefer handwriting over typing because handwriting practice helps me write more smoothly and improves the quality of my handwriting.

The original sentence has an issue with verb usage and missing object: 'helps to write' is awkward; after 'helps' use base verb with object ('helps me write'). Also 'better quality of handwriting' is unidiomatic; use 'improves the quality of my handwriting' or 'produces better handwriting'. Use of comparative 'more smoothly' is correct for manner.

× However, it is not easily accessible to type anywhere and anytime.

✓ However, it is not easy to type anywhere at any time.

The phrase 'not easily accessible to type' is incorrect. 'Accessible' is normally used for places or resources, not the action of typing. Use 'not easy to type' and idiomatic 'anywhere at any time' instead of 'anytime' in this context.

× I'm work in the office so my office provided me laptop.

✓ I work in an office, so my office provided me with a laptop.

'I'm work' mixes contraction and verb incorrectly; use 'I work'. Also article 'an' is needed before 'office'. The verb 'provided' requires the preposition 'with' for the recipient: 'provided me with a laptop'.

× So a lot of work I do on my laptop because it is also convenient and it is also portable as compared to computer.

✓ So I do a lot of work on my laptop because it is convenient and more portable compared to a desktop computer.

Word order 'a lot of work I do' is unnatural; put subject before verb. 'As compared to computer' is missing article and specific noun; use 'compared to a desktop computer' or 'compared to computers in general'. Also avoid repeating 'also' and use comparative 'more portable'.

× When I was completed my basic school umm but I I had joined an institute to learn computer because in my school there is no facility to learn computer and computer class.

✓ When I completed my basic schooling, I joined an institute to learn computers because my school did not have facilities or computer classes.

'When I was completed' is incorrect; use simple past 'When I completed'. 'I had joined' is unnecessary past perfect; simple past 'I joined' matches sequence. 'Learn computer' should be 'learn computers' or 'learn about computers'. 'There is no facility' should be past 'did not have facilities' to match past time. Remove filler words and duplicate 'I'.

× I I improve my typing by practicing a lot and in my office there is a lot of tasks provided my employer.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing a lot, and in my office my employer gives me many tasks.

Use gerund 'practicing' is correct, but sentence structure is awkward. 'There is a lot of tasks provided my employer' is ungrammatical: use active voice 'my employer gives me many tasks' and plural agreement 'many tasks'.

× So by doing my practice and work I learn smooth typing.

✓ So by practicing and doing my work, I have learned to type smoothly.

'By doing my practice and work I learn smooth typing' is unidiomatic. Use 'practicing' rather than 'doing my practice'. For a result over time, present perfect 'I have learned' is appropriate. 'Smooth typing' should be 'to type smoothly' (adverb form).